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German Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 2

Grocery Shopping

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the groceries that you bought during your last grocery shopping trip. Did you go to one store to buy everything? What was your most expensive item? What was your least expensive item? Did you buy an item that you haven’t tried before? What is one dish that you will be making this week using these groceries?

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Mein Land ist Brasilien, in Südamerika. Es ist in der Nähe von Argentinien, Uruguay, Paraguay, Peru, Kolumbien, Venezuela, Bolivien und die "Guyanas". Es befindet sich in den Tropen, und ist sehr groß.
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  • Tom
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    Mein Land ist Brasilien und befindet sich in Südamerika. 

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    Mein Land ist Brasilien und ist in Südamerika.

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    Mein Land ist in Südamerika und heißt Brasilien.

    Você nao precisa de uma virgula entre Tropen e und.

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  • swilam
    Mochapoints: 3016  |  Teacher Score: 1181

    Perfect. No mistakes.

    But instead of saying "Mein Land"...I would better say "Ich komme aus" ...

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  • swilam
    Mochapoints: 3016  |  Teacher Score: 1181

    I didnt see the first review....

    So you can say Ich komme aus or all the other options Tom mentioned...

    Gd lkkk

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  • haduske
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