How many objects?
Instructions:
Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5
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The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.
The boy has one-hundred candies and nine ice creams.
The woman has seventeen dress and Ten coat.
The boy has one-hundred candies and nine ice creams.
The woman has seventeen dress and Ten coat.
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The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles. The boy has one-hundred candies and nine ice creams. The woman has seventeen dresses and ten coats.
Very good!
1. a hundred / one hundred
2.dress - dresses
3.Ten coats - ten coats
The first sentence is very good. You have more than one of something and you used the 's' to make the word plural. In the second sentence with the ice-creams you really should use a noun after ice-cream. You do not use the 's' in this case; "...nine ice-cream cones." Then with the last sentence you should make dress and coat plural and do not capitalize the 'T' on the.
dress-dresses, coat-coats