My Country
Instructions:
Please introduce the country in which you live. What country would you like to visit on your next trip? Which country did you visit on your last trip?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 4
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Now is 10 o´clock in Sao Paulo , summer time.
9:45 o´clock
9:30 o´clock
9:45 o´clock
9:30 o´clock
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Change "9:45 o'clock 9:30 o'clock" to "It was 9:45. It was 9:30". I would also add more description like "am",morning hours, or "pm",afternoon and evening hours. Also, "o'clock" is only used for time that is on the hour.
example: 10:00 is written as 10 o'clock. 9:00 is written as 9 o'clock. 5:30 is written as 5:30.
Change "9:45 o'clock 9:30 o'clock" to "It was 9:45. It was 9:30". I would also add more description like "am",morning hours, or "pm",afternoon and evening hours. Also, "o'clock" is only used for time that is on the hour.
example: 10:00 is written as 10 o'clock. 9:00 is written as 9 o'clock. 5:30 is written as 5:30.