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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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When I go to the park, I like to see the children running from one side to another, I enjoy to see the faces of the mothers looking at the son or daughter like if he or she is doing somethind very veru important. It makes me remember when I visited the park with my little daughter and .....some times one is ridiculous: one believe that only my daughter does that important thing like to smile while is running and looking back in place of looking at the front.
Now, I do not use isit parks..I am afraid of it and alone is dangerous.
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  • Diego
    Mochapoints: 543  |  Teacher Score: 85 (0%)
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    Mochapoints: 543  |  Teacher Score: 85 (0%)
    I have to do the exercise but I will not tell the TRUTH. I NEVER visit the park I do not play any SPORTS I only use to ride on bicycle and I don't need the park HERE (hear es como oir) in Venezuela, parks are not a secure place. Only if you live in a private "Condominio" or place, you would enjoy a good park. Aquí en los Estados Unidos hay muchos parques que no están seguros tambíen. Que lástima. Very well written. Diego For reading I prefer my bed, or a place near a table or an armchair but at home....I dont like to be interrupted when I am reading
    Submitted over a year ago
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