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Active English Writing Exercise

Intermediate Course 2, Unit 4, Lesson 2

Write a shopping list

You and your friend, Rong, are planning a surprise birthday party. Rong wants to help with the shopping. Read Rong’s email. Then write a reply to him.

Writing Model

From: ronglu@writelink.com
Re: Birthday party shopping

Hi,

I can help you with the shopping for Claire’s party. I already bought some ice cream and a large chocolate cake. Do we need anything else? Please send me a shopping list. Do you know how many people will be at the party?

I’ll go shopping tomorrow.

Talk to you later,
Rong

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From:jean@live.com
Re:Birthday party

Hi,

I can help you with the shopping for Cath's party,I already bought some bottles of cava and a lot of snacks
Do we need anything else?Please send me a shopping list.Do you know how many people will be at the party?

I'll go shopping this afternoon.
Please, call me soon,
Jean
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Farn
    Mochapoints: 2376  |  Teacher Score: 208 (100%)

    Period after "party" in first sentence ncessary.

     

    no comma after "Please" needed." Please call me soon,"
    Submitted over a year ago
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