Active English Writing Exercise

Give Advice to a Friend

Harrison met a woman through DateHarmony.com. He wants your advice. Read Harrison’s email. Then write a reply to him.

Writing Model

Who: Harrison@parlevous.com
Subject: I’m in love!

Guess what? I think I found my perfect match online! Her name is Julia, and she’s a designer. I think I’m in love! I want to meet her right away! What do you think I should do?

Please write back soon!

Harrison

Author:
viviane

Who:Lennon@speaks.com
Subject:I'm in love.

Guess what?I'm so happy.I think I found the perfect man online.His name is James and he's an ingeneer,I think
he is the right man for me.I want to meet him very soon.What do you think I should do?

Please contact me soon.
Jany
Average Score:
Submitted: 2009-11-17 01:21:38




Reviews

  • 2009-11-17 01:21:38
    dianarado

    Here you are being asked to respond to Harrison's email.  I've made corrections for you anyway.

    Subject:  I'm in love. Guess what?  I'm so happy.  I think I found the perfect man online.  His name is James and he's an ingeneer,engineer,  I think he is the right man for me.  I want to meet him very soon.  What do you think I should do? Please contact me soon. Jany

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