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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

Zamira's submission: Average Rating:
My little brother Sarvar. He has brown eyes, short brown hair but his hair isn't curly, his character is happy and jolly. he is vary intellegent boy. he is tall but not fat boy.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • kenj
    Mochapoints: 3897  |  Teacher Score: 1200 (0%)
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  • kenj
    Mochapoints: 3897  |  Teacher Score: 1200 (0%)
    Not bad, I could understand you fine. I would write, "He has brown eyes and straight, short brown hair. He is a happy and intelligent boy." You don't need jolly as it means the same as happy. "He is a tall, thin boy" - I would say it that way Hope, Hier la toon!
    Submitted over a year ago
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