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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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I went to Turkey last year with my parents. that country is far from our country, I relaxed there well, I forgot all my troubles there and found many new friends. I was there about a week. Shortly, I had great holiday there.
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  • mona
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    Mochapoints: 1335  |  Teacher Score: 120 (100%)
    Very good. I just have a few corrections: "Iwent to Turkey last year with my parents. Turkey is far from our country. I relaxed there and I forgot all my troubles. I found many new friends. I was there about a week. Shortly, I had great holiday there." Overall, you did an excellent job.
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