English Writing Exercise

Describing Objects, Animals, and People

Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

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Did you lived in the villagery?there are have small rivers that the water is saft,many rough trees and store road. the villagery food is delicious whether hot or cool.so i think,you will be like the country life!

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Submitted: 2008-09-23 20:46:25

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2008-09-23 20:37:04
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2008-09-23 20:46:24
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Good effort! Spelling- village, soft or safe Quality- Good job following directions! You described 6 objects: the village, rivers, water, trees, road, and food. Remember: Use a capital letter to start each sentence. Grammar- Let me help you with some corrections: Did you [live] in the [village]? or [Do] you [live] in the [village]? There are small rivers with [safe (or) soft] water, many rough trees, and [a short] road. The [village] food is delicious, whether hot or cold. So, I think you will like the country life! Keep trying! :)

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