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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 3

Needs and Wants

Instructions: Compare “need” and “want” in sentences about six people: you and me, a boy and a girl, a man and a woman. Also, use positives and negatives of either “need” or “want” in some of the sentences. Example: I want a car, but I need to finish my college degree. She wants ice cream; she does not want broccoli.

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My home is not far from your home.Walk along the NengYuanRoad,turn left at the T-junction and go along that street.Turn right at the first crossing ,you'll see a park.My home is on the opposite of the park.You can also take the NO.19 bus to get the sanjiaohu station.Then you'll see my house.
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  • Chai Chu
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    My home is not far from YOURS.
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  • libby
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    Yours is perfectly understandable and nothing really wrong but have suggested more colloquial ways of expressing what you've put. Several options for the 1st sentence. I live not far from you. My house is not far from yours. We live quite near to each other. And more but that's enough for today!!! Turn left at the T-junction and go straight on and take the first right-hand turning.
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  • Mike
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    我明白你的写什么。 不去。
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  • Deniz Alexander...
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    yeah it is understanable.libby wrote every thing she hasnt left somethin to say.keep goig yoou doing well
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  • Michael
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    Really good work! Just note the little changes I have made: My home is not far from your home. Walk along the NengYuan Road, turn left at the T-junction and go along that street. Turn right at the first crossing and you'll see a park. My home is on the opposite side of the park. You can also take the No.19 bus to get the Sanjiaohu station, then you'll see my house.
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