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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 4

Describe your best friend

Instructions: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.

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I believe the more famous meal in Spain is the "Paella". When tourists come to Spain, they always eat Paella. Although most of the tourists eat this meal in a restaurant for tourists at the center of the city. So that they eat a very bad and frozen paella . Even so, they like this meal. I believe it's not good option eating in a restaurant for tourists, moreover this restaurants are more expensive than the others restaurants. This main ingredient is rice, and you can put shellfish, meat, vegetables,...
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  • Mr.Dhahli
    Mochapoints: 14632  |  Teacher Score: 5506 (92%)

    excellent effor....you uesed singal words and that is very nice

    This The main ingredient is rice,

    Keep it up man...you are doing very well

     

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  • Brenda Camilli
    Mochapoints: 10875  |  Teacher Score: 3237 (0%)

    *the most famous

    We use 'more' to indicate a comparison, such as: Juan is more handsome than Oscar.

    *...it's not a good option... (do not forget the article)

    *...these restaurants are more expensive than the other restaurants. (these is the plural form of 'this' and 'other' should be in singular unless the noun is missing, like: '...these restaurants are more expensive than the others.'

    You can say 'Its main ingredient...' (SU) or 'The main ingredient' (EL).

     

    ¡Bueno! You are doing great! Keep up the good work! :)

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  • Sunshine
    Mochapoints: 1630  |  Teacher Score: 581 (0%)

    I believe (that) the more(most) famous meal in Spain is the "Paella". When tourists come to Spain, they always eat Paella. Although(no need for 'although") most of the tourists eat this meal in a restaurant for tourists at the center of the city. So that they eat a very bad and frozen paella . Even so, they like this meal. I believe it's not (a)good option eating in a restaurant for tourists, moreover this restaurants are more expensive than the others restaurants(than the other restaurants). This(The) main ingredient is rice, and you can put shellfish, meat, (and)vegetables,...

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  • sayuri
    Mochapoints: 1861  |  Teacher Score: 1313

    You are doing really great! A few more practices and you're there. Keep it up!

     

    I believe the more  most famous meal in Spain is the "Paella". When tourists come to Spain, they always eat Paella. Although most of the tourists eat this meal in a restaurant for tourists at the center of the city. So that they eat a very bad and frozen paella . Even so, they like this meal. I believe it's not good option eating in a restaurant for tourists, moreover this  these restaurants are more expensive than the others restaurants. This  The main ingredients are is rice, and you can put shellfish, meat, and vegetables.

    Submitted over a year ago

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