Describe Your Home Tools
Instructions:
List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5
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Today it's March 24th, 2009. It's not a special day neither in Madrid nor in Spain. So that I'm working now. (or I'm trying to work).
It's sunny, although it' s a little cold.
I don't know what weather will be tomorrow. But, I believe, the weather will be similar to today.
It's sunny, although it' s a little cold.
I don't know what weather will be tomorrow. But, I believe, the weather will be similar to today.
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Today it is March the 24th, 2009. It is not a special day neither in Madrid nor in Spain. Therefore I am working now. (or I am trying to work). It is sunny, although it is a little cold. I do not know what weather will be tomorrow. But, I believe, the weather will be similar to today.
Very well
Charlie's correction are very good. You are doing well,keep it up! J
Today it's March 24th, 2009. It's not a special day neither in Madrid nor in Spain. So so that I'm working now (or I'm trying to work). It's sunny, although it' s a little cold. I don't know what the weather will be tomorrow. But, I believe, the weather will be similar to today.
Great job!
It's not a special day in Madrid or Spain.
Today it's March 24th, 2009. It's not a special day either in Madrid or in Spain (Or: It is a special day neither in Madrid nor in Spain) , so [that - optional] I'm working now (no comma) (or I'm trying to work). It's sunny, although it's a little cold. I don't know what the weather will be like tomorrow. But (no comma) I believe (no comma) the weather will be similar to today's. (More natural: But I believe it will be similar to today's).
PS Charlie has turned it into formal English; you can also simply say "Today is March..."
Good job! I would write it as follows:
Today is March 24th, 2009. It's not a special day in Madrid or in Spain, so I'm working now (or I'm trying to work). It's sunny, although it's a little cold. I don't know what the weather will be tomorrow but I believe the weather will be similar to today.
Very good ;)
Keep it up