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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 1

Describe the location of your city and country

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the locations of your city and country. Which countries are located north, south, east, and west of your country? In which corner of the country is your city located? Describe which cities are located north, south, east, or west of your city.

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My name is wily from china. I am here to study english for my business.
I need answer email in english and attend some exhibition such as canton fair, Shunde exhibition where i will meet some clientale who speaking english. That is why i want to improve my english.
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  • stephy
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    you have a good writing
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    great My name is Wily and I am from China. I joint livemocha program to improve my English skills to help me in my business. English will help me to answer any English emails and to attend some exhibitions such as Canton Fair and Shunde where I will meet some clients who are speaking English. That is why I want to improve my Englishskills.
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    Very good attempt Wily. Most of the corrections had been done by your friends. Anyway good luck! and do keep it on! Eliz
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