Introduce yourself
Instructions:
Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1
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MARK is a singer of the Westlife. He is tall and young. He's very rich, I guess.
I am hearing the westlife's music.
I am hearing the westlife's music.
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Jeff JacksonMochapoints: 1163 | Teacher Score: 369 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
Jeff JacksonMochapoints: 1163 | Teacher Score: 369 (0%)
Mark is a singer for Westlife. He is tall and young. He's probably very rich. I'm listening to Westlife's music right now. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
VuqarMochapoints: 3334 | Teacher Score: 2154 (0%)Ni hau I am LISTENING TO ............ Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Фернандо जोएलMochapoints: 13408 | Teacher Score: 5676 (100%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
Фернандо जोएलMochapoints: 13408 | Teacher Score: 5676 (100%)
Vas bastante bien, continua así. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Erik.Mochapoints: 131036 | Teacher Score: 122678 (100%)Congratulations on having completed this writing exercise, it is quite well done! As other users have already left you very useful commentary, I would encourage you simply to continue practicing your writing keeping three things in mind: (1) Always work on improving and expanding your linguistic repertoire, in both vocabulary and grammar, (2) Always respect the rules of capitalization, punctuation, and spelling, (3) Always think the subject through thoroughly, answering completely and appropriately to the question asked. Best of luck with your future studies! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
bigharryMochapoints: 1003 | Teacher Score: 27 (0%)You can also say... Mark is a good singer. He is a member of the band called westlife. He stands out in the group because of his height and looks. Probably he is rich because of his successfull career in the music industry. I love listening to their music. Take note: No need to capital all letters when it's a name...Not MARK....just "Mark". Use "their music" because you used westlife..which is a band/ group *** I hope my comments helps you in a way. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
hanzeeMochapoints: 778 | Teacher Score: 83 (0%)Jeff Jackson\Vuqar\ferjo1987 \Erik. and bigharry: thanks for your comments Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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