English Writing Exercise
Describing People
Describe six different people, using two descriptive words each: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young. The boy is tall.
MARK is a singer of the Westlife. He is tall and young. He's very rich, I guess.
I am hearing the westlife's music.
I am hearing the westlife's music.
Submitted: 2008-04-09 12:58:43
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2008-04-04 06:21:21Jeff JacksonAverage rating:
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2008-04-04 06:22:42Jeff Jackson
Mark is a singer for Westlife. He is tall and young. He's probably very rich. I'm listening to Westlife's music right now. -
2008-04-04 18:40:02Vuqar
Ni hau I am LISTENING TO ............ -
2008-04-05 01:31:35Фернандо जोएलAverage rating:
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2008-04-05 01:31:55Фернандо जोएल
Vas bastante bien, continua así. -
2008-04-06 17:13:02Erik.
Congratulations on having completed this writing exercise, it is quite well done! As other users have already left you very useful commentary, I would encourage you simply to continue practicing your writing keeping three things in mind: (1) Always work on improving and expanding your linguistic repertoire, in both vocabulary and grammar, (2) Always respect the rules of capitalization, punctuation, and spelling, (3) Always think the subject through thoroughly, answering completely and appropriately to the question asked. Best of luck with your future studies! -
2008-04-07 15:42:23bigharry
You can also say... Mark is a good singer. He is a member of the band called westlife. He stands out in the group because of his height and looks. Probably he is rich because of his successfull career in the music industry. I love listening to their music. Take note: No need to capital all letters when it's a name...Not MARK....just "Mark". Use "their music" because you used westlife..which is a band/ group *** I hope my comments helps you in a way. -
2008-04-09 12:58:43hanzee
Jeff Jackson\Vuqar\ferjo1987 \Erik. and bigharry: thanks for your comments
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