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English Writing Exercise

Describing People

Describe six different people, using two descriptive words each: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young. The boy is tall.

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hanzee
MARK is a singer of the Westlife. He is tall and young. He's very rich, I guess.
I am hearing the westlife's music.
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Submitted: 2008-04-09 12:58:43




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  • 2008-04-04 06:21:21
    Jeff Jackson
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  • 2008-04-04 06:22:42
    Jeff Jackson
    Mark is a singer for Westlife. He is tall and young. He's probably very rich. I'm listening to Westlife's music right now.
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  • 2008-04-04 18:40:02
    Vuqar
    Ni hau I am LISTENING TO ............
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  • 2008-04-05 01:31:35
    Фернандо जोएल
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  • 2008-04-05 01:31:55
    Фернандо जोएल
    Vas bastante bien, continua así.
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  • 2008-04-06 17:13:02
    Erik.
    Congratulations on having completed this writing exercise, it is quite well done! As other users have already left you very useful commentary, I would encourage you simply to continue practicing your writing keeping three things in mind: (1) Always work on improving and expanding your linguistic repertoire, in both vocabulary and grammar, (2) Always respect the rules of capitalization, punctuation, and spelling, (3) Always think the subject through thoroughly, answering completely and appropriately to the question asked. Best of luck with your future studies!
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  • 2008-04-07 15:42:23
    bigharry
    You can also say... Mark is a good singer. He is a member of the band called westlife. He stands out in the group because of his height and looks. Probably he is rich because of his successfull career in the music industry. I love listening to their music. Take note: No need to capital all letters when it's a name...Not MARK....just "Mark". Use "their music" because you used westlife..which is a band/ group *** I hope my comments helps you in a way.
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  • 2008-04-09 12:58:43
    hanzee
    Jeff Jackson\Vuqar\ferjo1987 \Erik. and bigharry: thanks for your comments
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