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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 3

Describing Objects

Instructions: Using one positive and one negative statement, describe six objects (a car, a flower, a coin, a tree, a house, a purse). Ex. The house is black. It is not white.

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My first house is grey，it's 30 yeas old. the front door is black and wood.
There is a yard in front of the house.
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  • Pavel
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  • ESLBruce
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    This writing is surprising. Since the prompt requests that you write in the past, I was expecting the past tense. However, if you are still living in the same house that you did when you were a child, it would be appropriate and your sentences are fine. I think you should have written another sentence, though, explaining that you still live in the same house that you did when you were a child. "I still live in the same house."
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  • 白鷹
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    Very good, keep up the good work.
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  • apendrapew
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    My first house is gray. It's 30 years old. The front door is black and is wooden. The house has a front yard.
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  • Фернандо जोएल
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    You have to writte in past tense, but it is all right.
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  • Hansibai
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  • Hansibai
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    Tense aside, you did well with your sentence grammar. Do remember to capitalize the first word in a sentence even if it is "the."
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  • laura
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    very good :)
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  • christian estra...
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    good job.. keep on studying to improve your writng.
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  • Ronny Bryson 彭瑞...
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    My first house is grey，it's 30 yeas old. the front door is black and made of wood. There is a yard in front of the house.

    This is out of context in regard to the exercise setting, but it's good anyway.
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