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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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Today is hot. He doesn´t need an umbrella, he needs a hat. Tomorrow will be a could day, he really will need a scarf, hat and an umbrella. Today is could and raining, the woman needs an umbrella and a jacket.
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  • Oshpazdandi
    Mochapoints: 29422  |  Teacher Score: 13249 (95%)

    Good!

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  • L
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    He doesn't need an umbrella, but he needs a hat.

    Tomorrow will be a could cold day, he will really need a scarf, a hat, and an umbrella.

    Today is could cold and raining....

     

    Good!

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