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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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Yesterday, I had a happy holiday with my friend and my family.
In the morning, i got up at 6 o'clock and then had a breakfast with my family. 8 o'clock, I went out and visited my friend's house. I helped her with her house work and then she go with me to by a present for my friend's birthday. Then we have lunch together . In the afternoon, I went to my friend's birthday party and had a very happy party. The party finished at 6 o'clock and I went home to have dinner with my families .
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