English Writing Exercise
Describing your day
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?
In café, I will order a cup of apple juice and add some ices in it. besides, I also want a piece of pastry. Sandwich is my favorite food as well as.
Submitted: 2008-05-15 13:12:32
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2008-05-13 05:03:17angelaAverage rating:
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2008-05-13 05:07:17angela
At a cafe, I would order a glass of apple juice with some icecubes in it. A piece of pastry or a sandwich are also my favorites.Rate This Review
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2008-05-14 03:41:52xiaohaha
better than meRate This Review 0 0
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2008-05-15 13:03:53AzureWolfAverage rating:
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2008-05-15 13:12:32AzureWolf
Why was the rating for this so low? There is only one mistake, and it's not a real mistake! In a café, I order a cup of apple juice and add some ices in it. "will order" is ok, but usually people talk in present tense. Like, "I go to school," "I dance at parties." Same thing, "I order at a café." I also like to have some pastry. Besides is a tricky word. The meaning is close to "also," but it is a little different. See examples: "I cannot go outside. Besides, I should study at home." "We cannot be lovers. Besides, I am moving." "I cannot go outside. It is ok because I should study at home." "We cannot be lovers. It is ok because I am moving." The meaning is closer to "it is ok because" than "also." Sandwich is a favorite of mine as well. Keep practicing! =)Rate This Review 0 0
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