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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4

Describe an area in your city

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

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I am a chinese. I have long black hair and black eyes. I'm neither fat nor thin, neither tall nor short.
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  • AzureWolf
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  • AzureWolf
    Mochapoints: 4194  |  Teacher Score: 463 (0%)
    You sound beautiful. =P But yes, your description sounds like Godilocks and the Three Bears: just right. Grammar and words are perfect. Only one correction: Chinese, not chinese. American, Canadian, British <-- all are proper.
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  • xiaohaha
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    the words you describle is clear and live.but a little simple.
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