Describe Your Home Tools
Instructions:
List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5
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Today was a beautiful holiday day in Brazil. The weather was sunny. Today was very hot without rain. I hope tomorrow will be sunny too because now have very star in the sky.
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"because now we have a starry sky"
well done!
STARRY SKY
Hi Junio,
First of all you didn't answer the questions in the exercise. Eventhough I know that it is the 13th of October, you should assume that the reader doesn't know.
Correction:
Today was a beautiful sunny day in Brazil. The temperature was high and fortunatelly it didn't rain. I'm not sure how the weather will be tomorrow, but I hope it will be as sunny as today. The clear weather causes a star-filled sky at night that I like very much.