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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

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zhe4 ge nǚren2 bu2shi4 shou4. Ta1 shi4 pang4.
zhe4 ge nan2ren2 bu2shi4 ai3. Ta1 shi4 gao1.
zhe4ge1 nan2hai2 bu2shi4 ai3. Ta1 shi4 gao1.
zhe4ge1 nǚhai2 nian2ji bu2 da4. zhe4ge1 nǚhai2 nian2ji xiao3.
Ni3 bu2shi4 pang4 ni3 shi4 shou4.
Wo3 bu2shi4 shou4. Wo3 shi4 pang4.

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  • SNAIL
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    zhe ge nan ren bu ai,ta hen gao. zhe ge nan hai bu ai,ta hen gao. zhe ge nǚ hai nian ji bu da,ta nian ji hen xiao. ni bu pang,ni shou. wo bu shou,wo pang.
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    very very good
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  • cynthia
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    你写得很好。但是这样会更好：这个男人不矮，他很高。我不瘦，我胖。（中文中这样的句子一般不用“是”，直接描述高矮胖瘦。）
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  • susan_hy11
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    不错,继续努力,加油!
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  • Wawa Young
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    zhe ge nv ren bu shou. Ta pang. Zhe ge nan ren bu ai. Ta gao. Zhe ge nan hai bu ai. Ta gao. Zhe ge nv hai nian ji bu da. zhe ge nv hai nianji xiao. Ni bu pang, ni shou. Wo bu shou, wo pang.
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  • xhuang3269
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    Very good! I can see your writing in Bopomofo, Chinese mean: 这个女人不是瘦。她是胖。 这个男人不是矮。他是高。 这个男孩不是矮。他是高。 这个女孩年纪不大。这个女孩年纪小。 你不是胖。你是瘦。 我不是瘦。我是胖。 Your writing is very good for a beginner. I only made a few changes to reflect how it might be said by a native speaker of Chinese. Good luck! 这个女人不瘦。她是胖的。 这个男人不矮。他是高的。 这个男孩不矮。他是高的。 这个女孩年纪不大。她的年纪小。 你不胖。你瘦。 我不瘦。我胖。 zhe4 ge nǚren2 bu2 shou4. Ta1 shi4 pang4 de. zhe4 ge nan2ren2 bu2 ai3. Ta1 shi4 gao1 de. zhe4ge nan2hai2 bu2 ai3. Ta1 shi4 gao1 de. zhe4ge nǚhai2 nian2ji bu2 da4. ta1de nian2ji xiao3. Ni3 bu2 pang4 ni3 shou4. Wo3 bu2 shou4. Wo3 pang4.
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  • Wawa Young
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    pls do not use " shi" before Adj.
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    这是个女人.不瘦,不能说"不是瘦"把一些SHI去掉就可以了.
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  • zhangyijenny
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    拼音和音调都很准，很棒，
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    这个男人不矮，他很高。我不瘦，我胖.
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