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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

Victoria's submission: Average Rating:
这个女人高。她瘦。

这个男人胖。他矮。

这个男孩富有。

这个女孩很穷。

你年纪小。你是男人。

我年纪大。我是女人。
Submitted over a year ago

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  • wjlucy
    Mochapoints: 3132  |  Teacher Score: 969 (0%)
    你写的很好, 加油!
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • louinawo(卢艺萌 Lu...
    Mochapoints: 1403  |  Teacher Score: 382 (0%)
    you did good job! but 这个男孩富有only has one teatur, you should write two to describe a same person. Such as"这个男孩又年轻又富有. or we say"这个男孩很年轻,这个南海很富有." so is the next sentence. keep practicing!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • 波斯菊
    Mochapoints: 433  |  Teacher Score: 50 (0%)
    你说的好棒,不过我想把“你年纪小,你是男人。”改成你“年纪小,你是男孩”会好些,是吧。
    Submitted over a year ago
  • genie
    Mochapoints: 2049  |  Teacher Score: 245
    这个女人又高又瘦。 这个男人又胖又矮。 这个男孩富有。 这个女孩很穷。 你年纪小。你是男人。 我年纪大。我是女人。
    Submitted over a year ago
  • 萤火虫 Firefly
    Mochapoints: 1229  |  Teacher Score: 321 (0%)
    注意你的标点符号!不过你真的很棒了!继续加油!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • diego
    Mochapoints: 12  |  Teacher Score:(0%)
    diego willian
    Submitted over a year ago
  • xiaobo
    Mochapoints: 5139  |  Teacher Score: 795 (100%)
    很棒! 不过这样会好些,如:"这个女人高但是她瘦。"
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Papago
    Mochapoints: 13856  |  Teacher Score: 2214 (88%)

    Your good work, you are very hard.你的作业很好,你很用功。\\\\这个女人她又高又瘦。那个男人他又胖又矮。这个男孩很富。那个女孩很穷。\\\\\\你是年纪小的男人 to 你是男孩。(you are boy.) ;\\\\\\我是年纪大的女人。to 我是大姐。(i am older sister.) 

    Submitted over a year ago

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