Describing People
Instructions:
Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.
Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2
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yangyangMochapoints: 2073 | Teacher Score: 158 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
yangyangMochapoints: 2073 | Teacher Score: 158 (0%)
我是個又高又胖的老男人。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
ChynnaMochapoints: 107217 | Teacher Score: 103536Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
ChynnaMochapoints: 107217 | Teacher Score: 103536
Great efforts!!!! Congratulations! Unit 1-1 and 2 provide the sample Chinese vocabulary. You develop the topic vividly in Chinese characters. Your writing is concise, fluent， beautiful, perfect and comprehensible. I really enjoy your description. You may also get benefits from other helpful comments. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up and move forward with your friend team!!! 非常好! 您的文字简明，流利，容易理解， 漂亮。为了尽量保留其创作价值，我修改了一点。您也可以从其他的评论中获益。非常感谢您！ 希望您能同您的朋友团队一道继续前进！ Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
KevinMochapoints: 565 | Teacher Score: 45 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
KevinMochapoints: 565 | Teacher Score: 45 (0%)
非常好, 我能明白。请继续努力！ Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
tigerscorpionMochapoints: 278 | Teacher Score: 74 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
tigerscorpionMochapoints: 278 | Teacher Score: 74 (0%)
very good,but it doesn't ask your fat or thin. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Charley GarrettMochapoints: 805 | Teacher Score: 542 (0%)I get extra credit for answering the unasked question. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
ChynnaMochapoints: 107217 | Teacher Score: 103536
Charley Garrett Extra credit!!!! Beautiful answer!!!! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
vivid autumnMochapoints: 697 | Teacher Score: 157 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
tigerscorpionMochapoints: 278 | Teacher Score: 74 (0%)
Good,and you should use some modifiers. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
superhunterMochapoints: 2907 | Teacher Score: 416 (0%)我是个年纪大的男人，我又高又胖。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
MaggieMochapoints: 2258 | Teacher Score: 1328 (0%)Very good, Charley. You describe yourself very clearly. Keep going! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
chrisaMochapoints: 1943 | Teacher Score: 642 (0%)我是个又高又胖的男人。我年纪有点大。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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