Describing Objects
Instructions:
Using one positive and one negative statement, describe six objects (a car, a flower, a coin, a tree, a house, a purse). Ex. The house is black. It is not white.
Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 3
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我们的第一住宅是老的白色的。这扇门是棕色的。我们有花园。樹高綠色。
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imagineeringMochapoints: 284 | Teacher Score: 42 (0%)语序有写问题 如:我们的第一住宅是白色的老屋.. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
jacobleeMochapoints: 291 | Teacher Score: 25 (0%)我们的第一住宅是旧的，白色的。门是棕色的，我们还有花园，里面有树和花。 '老' usually describe someone. "旧" usually describe something Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Charley GarrettMochapoints: 805 | Teacher Score: 542 (0%)谢谢。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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很好,继续努力 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
I can flyMochapoints: 57 | Teacher Score: 5 (0%)Very good ! but I hope that you have to hard work! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
peterMochapoints: 1789 | Teacher Score: 103 (0%)我的第一所住宅是一栋白色的老房子。它的大门是棕色的。它有一个花园，花园里种着高高的绿树。or（花园里绿树成荫！） Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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我们的第一住宅是旧的, 白色的。这扇门是棕色的。我们有花园和綠色的樹。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
ChynnaMochapoints: 107217 | Teacher Score: 103536
Congratulations! You did a very good job as a beginner! 1.This topic is based on the vocabulary and sentence patterns in Unit 1-3 and 4 (subject+shi+color+de). 2. You use them to write about the topic in Chinese characters. 3. You also try to enhance your learning by using the sentence pattern, "我们有花园"。"綠色的大樹”。. 4. Your writing is concise, fluent, and comprehensible. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up. Best wishes to you！ 非常好! 您能用汉语文字清楚地表达熟悉的意思。您能在熟悉的题目下用课内的知识，创造中文句子。您使用的课文的句型和词汇很正确。 在课内知识基础上，您可以学习其他的中文表达法，丰富您的汉语知识。非常感谢您。继续努力！我为您祝福！ Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
向宇Mochapoints: 674 | Teacher Score: 64 (0%)我们的第一座住宅很老，它是白色的。它的门是棕色的，有花园，有树，树是绿色的很高 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
FaithMochapoints: 1988 | Teacher Score: 690 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
FaithMochapoints: 1988 | Teacher Score: 690 (0%)
我们的第一个住处是一所白色的老房子。房子的门是棕色的，里面有一个花园，花园里的树高大而且茂盛。I the sentences above are based on my understanding. hope they will help you. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
FaithMochapoints: 1988 | Teacher Score: 690 (0%)
我们的第一个住处是一所白色的老房子。房子的门是棕色的，里面有一个花园，花园里的树高大而且茂盛。I the sentences above are based on my understanding. hope they will help you. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
hanyaMochapoints: 382 | Teacher Score: 30 (0%)我们的第一住宅是旧的 ，白色的．这扇门是棕色的．我们有花园，树是绿色的． Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
sharonMochapoints: 167 | Teacher Score: 24 (0%)I think writing like this is better.Whatever,you do a good job.Come on.我们的第一住宅是老的，白色的。它的门是棕色的。我们有个花园，那里的树很高。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
月漫云端Mochapoints: 273 | Teacher Score: 46 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
月漫云端Mochapoints: 273 | Teacher Score: 46 (0%)
词组正确,只是语句需要更加改进.继续加油!很不错! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
JasonHeMochapoints: 577 | Teacher Score: 40 (0%)很好,你很棒. 最后那句是不是:树是绿色. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
michelle_tangMochapoints: 3071 | Teacher Score: 629 (0%)Submitted over a year ago
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michelle_tangMochapoints: 3071 | Teacher Score: 629 (0%)
很好，很清楚的表达了你的意思，不过可以稍微改下，使句子更流畅。“我们的第一住宅是老房子，它是白色的，它的门是棕色的。我们有个花园，花园里种着绿色的大树。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
windeyMochapoints: 364 | Teacher Score: 100 (0%)
我们的第一住宅是一幢白色的老楼。它的前门是棕色的。我们有一个花园。花园里有绿色的高树。 以上是我的建议。另外，花园在什么地方？在楼前还是楼后，最好说清楚。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
windeyMochapoints: 364 | Teacher Score: 100 (0%)
我们的第一住宅是一幢白色的老楼。它的前门是棕色的。我们有一个花园。花园里有绿色的高树。 以上是我的建议。另外，花园在什么地方？在楼前还是楼后，最好说清楚。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
windeyMochapoints: 364 | Teacher Score: 100 (0%)
刚刚已经给你提过建议了。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
windeyMochapoints: 364 | Teacher Score: 100 (0%)
刚刚已经给你提过建议了。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
windeyMochapoints: 364 | Teacher Score: 100 (0%)
刚刚已经给你提过建议了。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
JoyMochapoints: 2331 | Teacher Score: 233 (100%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
JoyMochapoints: 2331 | Teacher Score: 233 (100%)
不错，继续加油。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
AmyMochapoints: 474 | Teacher Score: 43 (0%)
问：有树和花吗？ 答：只要答有还是没有，就可以了 你的中文不错了，嘻嘻！！ Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
AmyMochapoints: 474 | Teacher Score: 43 (0%)
问：有树和花吗？ 答：只要答有还是没有，就可以了 你的中文不错了，嘻嘻！！ Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
NgocMochapoints: 16669 | Teacher Score: 9733 (100%)我們的第一故居是舊式的, 它有白色的牆壁, 屋子有棕色的前門, 我記得以前有個美麗的小花園圍繞著屋子, 裡面還有很多的樹蔭和美麗的花朵. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
SudylMochapoints: 849 | Teacher Score: 64 (0%)我们的第一住宅是白色的老住宅，它的门是棕色的。我们有一个花园，里面的树高而且绿。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
任代元Mochapoints: 1033 | Teacher Score: 113 (0%)cheer up Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
chrisaMochapoints: 1943 | Teacher Score: 642 (0%)我们的第一住宅是一所白色的老宅子．它有一扇棕色的大门．房后面有一个美丽的大花园，里面种着许多高大的树和各种美丽的花草． Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
chrisaMochapoints: 1943 | Teacher Score: 642 (0%)
我们的第一住宅是一所白色的老宅子．它有一扇棕色的大门．房子后面有一座美丽的大花园，里面种着许多高大的绿树和各种美丽的花草． Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
leMochapoints: 4198 | Teacher Score: 1175 (0%)我们的第一住宅是一所老房子，墙是白色的，门是棕色的。有花园，花园里有高大的绿叶树。hope this help. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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lionsanMochapoints: 714 | Teacher Score: 107 (0%)不错 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
AprilMochapoints: 151 | Teacher Score: 5 (0%)我们的第一住宅是一座白色的新楼，前门是棕色的，我们有一个花园，里面有绿色的树和美丽的花. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
yoyoMochapoints: 860 | Teacher Score: 60 (0%)我们的第一个房子是一座带有花园的白色老房子。它有一扇棕色的门，而且花园里有高高的绿树。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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GOOD! 我们的第一住宅是座老房子,墙面是白色的,门是绿色的,我们还有一个小花园,有一些树,它们很高 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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我们的第一住宅是旧的,白色的。有一扇门是棕色的。我们有花园。樹木枝叶茂盛。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
大姐Mochapoints: 3315 | Teacher Score: 209 (0%)我们应该写我 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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我们的第一住宅是一幢白色的老房子，门是棕色的。我们的房子有花园，花园里有高大的树。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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selinaMochapoints: 56 | Teacher Score: 5 (0%)什么是第一住宅？ Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
EmmaMochapoints: 1523 | Teacher Score: 141 (0%)
我认为最后一句改成这样会更好：树很高是绿色的。 不过你的汉语很棒哦！加油！ Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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smlml1Mochapoints: 645 | Teacher Score: 65 (0%)
well done! you have make yourself clearly. If you pay more attention to the subject. I will be better. as a native ,I will say like this"我们的第一座住宅是老式的白色住宅。它的前门是棕色的。我们有一个花园。花园中有綠色高大的树木。" hold on! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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我们的第一住宅是旧的，它是白色的，它的前门是棕色的，有庭院，还有花园，花园里有绿色的树，长得很高，还有花。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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住宅的颜色没有写，树高绿色应该是绿色的树。希望互相帮助。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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Judy1987Mochapoints: 876 | Teacher Score: 66 (0%)good.你的标点符号有点问题，应该用逗号隔开，但最后的一句＂樹高綠色＂应该用顿号阁开．总体来说很不错，继续努力．呵呵 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
小v桃Mochapoints: 1076 | Teacher Score: 40 (0%)我们的第一住宅是老的白色的。门是棕色的，这里有花园，树很高而且很绿。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
MandyMochapoints: 1389 | Teacher Score: 48 (0%)樹高綠色 You can say: 有高的绿色的树(There are some green tall trees)。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
renaMochapoints: 812 | Teacher Score: 41 (0%)
我们的第一个房子是旧的,它是白色的.前门是棕色的.我们有个花园,有高高的绿树 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
草叶有舞Mochapoints: 1266 | Teacher Score: 152 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
草叶有舞Mochapoints: 1266 | Teacher Score: 152 (0%)
我们的第一住宅是一栋白色的老房子。前门是棕色的。我们有自己的花园，里面种有绿色的大树。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
草叶有舞Mochapoints: 1266 | Teacher Score: 152 (0%)
我们的第一住宅是一栋白色的老房子。前门是棕色的。我们有自己的花园，里面种有绿色的大树。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
张阿乖Mochapoints: 12 | Teacher Score: 8 (0%)可以说花园里有高大的树。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
BenMochapoints: 202 | Teacher Score: 48 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
BenMochapoints: 202 | Teacher Score: 48 (0%)
Well done Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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ypplelandMochapoints: 260 | Teacher Score: 10 (0%)
我们的第一住宅是1988年的旧楼，是白色的。前门是棕色的，前门口是个花园，花园里有绿色的大树和五颜六色的花。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
rebeccaMochapoints: 436 | Teacher Score: 20 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
rebeccaMochapoints: 436 | Teacher Score: 20 (0%)
你可以说一下你的花园里都有什么，有什么特点。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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树很高，是绿色的。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
kingMochapoints: 2799 | Teacher Score: 135 (0%)
怎么用繁体 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
yanguihuaMochapoints: 1857 | Teacher Score: 40 (100%)我们的第一住宅是旧的，白色的。前门是棕色的。庭院里有花园。花园里有许多树和五彩缤纷的花。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
贝壳Mochapoints: 1038 | Teacher Score: 159 (0%)樹高綠色。 应该说树很高,都很绿. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
ivyMochapoints: 269 | Teacher Score: 55 (0%)not say 这扇门是棕色的,it is say 前门是棕色的 not say 樹高綠色,it is say 树很高，是绿色的 老的，you also can say 旧的 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
、Ian·LowMochapoints: 588 | Teacher Score: 51 (0%)有庭院吗？ 有庭院.It's not mean 'garden". 如果是那样,有树和花吗? It's means "There are tree or flowers?" Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
lhxycyMochapoints: 131 | Teacher Score: 25 (0%)
我们的第一个住宅是古老的白色建筑。前门是棕色的。我们有一个美丽的小花园，花园里的树又高又绿。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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RachelMochapoints: 141 | Teacher Score: 105 (0%)
Not too bad ! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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zhang junMochapoints: 131 | Teacher Score: 45 (0%)虽然语序有点儿问题,但是意思,还是很明确的.我想我已经看懂了. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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很好,不过最后'樹高綠色'不通顺,可以说'树很高,是绿色' Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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我们的第一住宅是旧的，白色的。这扇门是棕色的。我们有花园。樹高，是綠色的。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
JohnnyMochapoints: 520 | Teacher Score: 10 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
JohnnyMochapoints: 520 | Teacher Score: 10 (0%)
说,我们的第一住宅又老有白.这扇门是棕色的,我们有花园,树又高有綠. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
woMochapoints: 686 | Teacher Score: 62 (0%)我们的第一住宅是旧的，是白色的，大门是棕色的，我们有院子，是个花园，种的绿色的树。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
ttliciousMochapoints: 955 | Teacher Score: 19 (0%)good ! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Julie_741Mochapoints: 1301 | Teacher Score: 83 (0%)Good job!Just work on! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
XiaoyanMochapoints: 4119 | Teacher Score: 234我们的第一住宅是一个古老的白色的房屋，它的门是棕色的。我们也有花园，花园里有许多绿色的树。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
j0j0Mochapoints: 214 | Teacher Score: 40 (0%)
我们的第一间住宅是老的白色的, 它有一扇棕色的大门。我们还有一个花园, 树长的很高,郁郁葱葱。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
springMochapoints: 2977 | Teacher Score: 206 (0%)我们的第一个住处是旧的而且是白色的,它的门是棕色的 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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恩,不错,加油加油 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
luojingboMochapoints: 1322 | Teacher Score: 15 (0%)我们住在一所白色的老房子里,门是棕色的.我们家有花园,花园里有高大的绿色的树木. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
MaggieMochapoints: 2258 | Teacher Score: 1328 (0%)There is something wrong with the question, in Chinese, "第一住宅”sounds very weird. It's better to say: 我们的第一座（所）住宅是座白色的老房子，房子有一扇门是棕色的，还有花园。花园里有高高的绿色的樹。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
YoyoMochapoints: 924 | Teacher Score: 174 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
YoyoMochapoints: 924 | Teacher Score: 174 (0%)
Good job. 轻微语法错误，意思正确。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
NgocMochapoints: 16669 | Teacher Score: 9733 (100%)
對不起 各位朋友! 我想借這兒告訴大家一點意見 : 是關於 Selina 的問題:< 什么是第一住宅？> 第一住宅是由我們出生後所住的第一所屋子, 可能在長大的過程, 我們已搬了幾次家, 不再住那所屋子了, 所以寫的時候, 要帶有過去式的語氣. 還有 king 的 <怎么用繁体?> 怎麼用 ? 我只懂繁體字, 我真的不懂簡體字, 繁體字是由 ㄅㄆㄇㄈㄉㄊㄋㄌㄍㄎㄏㄐㄑㄒ... 組合而成的 , 打簡體字比較快過打繁體字. 祝大家快樂 ! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
William[威廉]Mochapoints: 1185 | Teacher Score: 931.没有按照规定用一个否定特征描述。 2.“老的”与“白色的”是并列关系，中间应该加上顿号或逗号。 总体不错。 Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
王子豪Mochapoints: 4735 | Teacher Score: 137 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar:
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