Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 4

Describing People and Objects

Instructions: Describe people and objects, including both singular and plural forms. Use both positive and negative statements. Ex. We are women. We are not men. This is a gold coin. These are not yellow flowers.

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我有一宠物。我的宠物是猫.Princess是女猫.

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butterflydb

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butterflydb

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you shuould say that ,一只猫，or 一条猫。母猫，not 女猫，but I think your chinese is goog too.cheer up!

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lucy

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you did very well. 我有一只宠物。

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Charley Garrett

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谢谢。

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我有一只宠物。我的宠物是猫. Princess是母猫.

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Chynna

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Congratulations! You did a very good job as a beginner! 1.This topic is based on the vocabulary and sentence patterns in Unit 1-4 and 5 about adj. and measure words. 2. You use them to write about the topic in Chinese Pinyin. 3. Your writing is concise, fluent, and comprehensible except for the typos. 4. You use "有“ very well. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up. Best wishes to you！非常好! 您能用汉语拼音清楚地表达熟悉的意思。您能在熟悉的题目下用课内的知识，创造中文句子。您使用的课文的句型和词汇很正确。我只作了一点修改。在课内知识基础上，您可以学习其他的中文表达法，丰富您的汉语知识。非常感谢您。继续努力！我为您祝福！

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笨笨猪妖

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错了,一个地方,"Princess是女猫"应是"Princess是母猫"

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ygll

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good! 有些地方还需改进，如我的宠物是一只猫。

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我有一只宠物，她是一只公主猫

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You done a good exercise, hope that the efforts, I believe you soon be able to use Chinese exchange with us. Ha ha. . 真的做得很好哦，不过我们一般不说“女猫”，而说“母猫”。希望你能更上一层楼。I hope you scale new heights。

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caoqin04

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应该是母猫，不应该是女猫。中文中标点符号与英文不一样。用“。”，不用“.”。

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caoqin04

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把“.”改为“。” 应该是母猫。

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Princess是母猫.

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一个宠物；女猫改为母猫；Princess是公主我有个宠物，是母猫，名字叫公主我有个宠物，名字叫公主的猫。我的宠物是猫，名字叫公主！

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hijack

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I can understand your mean. Here is my suggestion: 我有ㄧ隻寵物,我的寵物是一隻貓.她是ㄧ隻叫Princess的母貓.

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malishi

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很好，继续努力。

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很好, 前面应该是 (我有一只宠物)

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tanlihua

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少了了词,"一只"宠物 such as the different of"one piece of paper" and "one paper"

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应该是：我有一只宠物。Princess是雌猫。

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我有一只宠物，我的宠物是一只猫，Princess是女猫.

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Rose

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我有一宠物，我的宠物是猫，它是只母猫；中国人讲动物讲的是公母，而女指的是人类，人类才会用男女来形容.

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Princess是母猫。

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jane

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不错啊！不过我决得说是一只母猫会不会好一点呢？？

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gloria826

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你有多少只猫呢？

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Louisa

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我有“一个”宠物；应该是“母猫”不是“女猫”

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Louisa

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应该是“一个”；应该写“母猫”不是“女猫”

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Princess是母猫

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我有一个宠物,它是猫.Princess是个母猫.

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shmily

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你可以这么说：我有一只宠物，我的宠物是猫，它是波斯猫。

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大姐

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女猫. 应该为母猫.

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我有宠物。我的宠物是猫，她的名字叫Princess，是只雌猫

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Jessica

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i have a pet ,it is a cat ,and her name is princess

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sprine

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very good! I know your meaning. You can express like:我有一只宠物猫princess.它是只母猫。中文对动物分性别时用公母或雌雄有时间也检查一下我的作业，谢谢！

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我是卖白菜的

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very well ^_^ use "。" don't use "." don't speak “女猫” say“母猫”

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Tomy

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you can say 我有一只宠物，它是猫。它是雌性的。

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Princess是一只母猫。

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joyce1985

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哈哈。写的不错呀，我看见大家给你的评语，正是我想表达的，因此我就不再重复啦。加油！取得更大的进步。

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roselia

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Hi Charley, We always say 母 or 雌 instead of 女 to describe female animals in chinease. If you have any questions please feel free to contect me in e-mail. My e-mail address is lixwmaster@126.com

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加油

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wangqimars

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I have A pet=我有一只宠物 My pet is a cat=我的宠物是只猫 Princess is a famale cat=Princess是只母猫（only when we refer to an animal,especially cute pets or some pup we like,we use"女",generally the word for animal is "母"）

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wangqimars

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BTW,what a noble cat you have,at least the name

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healy

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你的中文很好！有空可以可能教我英语吗？我教你中文。晚上时我们可以语音练习

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我有一只宠物。我的宠物是猫.Princess是母猫.

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mmyfl

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很好呀.不过通常不会说是"女猫"而是说"母猫".不过这不重要,重要的是你很好的表达了自己的意思.而且看得出来你是把你的猫当作人来看待的,从这一点来说你没错,而是我们两国文化的差异.

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Mandy

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Princess是女猫. NOT "女猫"but "母猫 " OR " 雌猫"

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很好

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Terry_Ko

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I have a suggestion about your sentence : “我有一只名字叫做Princess的雌性宠物猫。 In chinese we usually say "雌性" for the female animal .

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一只猫一是数字词，后面要加量词。只有在古文中才会省略量词

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、Ian·Low

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您有多少只宠物? It's means “How many cat do you have?"

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母猫

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Well done

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不，我只有一种宠物---猫，而且也就只有一只，它叫Princess，是母的。

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我有一只宠物猫，它的名字叫Princess, 它是一只母猫。

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我有一只宠物, 我的宠物是猫, Princess 是一只母猫. Please don't describe animals with this word of " woman ". Usually we just say that my pet is a female cat.

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good

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dongzhi10001

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好。也可这样说：我有一个宠物，它是一只猫。Princess是一只女猫。

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动物是用公或母来形容的，不用男女

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你这句话有误，应更改为：我有一只宠物，它是一只母猫，名字叫做Princess. 你那句如果在口语中可以明白，但在书面上显得很啰嗦。

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good

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猫，应该用公或者母

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Princess是公主我们不说女猫，而是母猫

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您有多少只宠物问的是数量~~应回答：我有（）只宠物。

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我有一只宠物. 我的宠物是猫. Princess是只母猫. 一般不用"女"来形容动物

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good 我的宠物是猫.Princess是母猫

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我有一只名叫Princess女猫的宠物.

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应该是：我有一个宠物。我的宠物是猫.Princess是母猫。我的建议：表示物的数量的格式为“数词+量词”，所以是“一个宠物”，而不是“一宠物”。表示动物的雌雄，不能用表示人性别的“男女”

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很好！不过可以稍作改动：我有宠物，我的宠物是一只猫，Princess是一只母猫。

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simplified chinese:我有一只宠物。我的宠物是只母猫，它叫Princess。 traditional chinese:我有一隻寵物。我的寵物是隻母貓，它叫Princess。 "女" always means women. If you want to decribe the sex of an animal, you should use "公(male)母(female)"and"雄(male)雌(female)".

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我有一宠物。我的宠物是猫.Princess是一只母猫.

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我有一宠物。我的宠物是猫.Princess是一只母猫.

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我有一只宠物。我的宠物是猫.Princess是一母猫.

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我有一只宠物。我的宠物是猫.Princess是一母猫.

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我有一只宠物猫，她叫princess. ‘她’use as 'she and her' means the woman

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是‘母’猫，不能说成‘女’猫。

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Whwn you descibe a female cat,you should say "母猫"not"女猫".Come on!Friend.

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Whwn you descibe a female cat,you should say "母猫"not"女猫".Come on!Friend.

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我有一只宠物猫，她叫princess.

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写的挺好：）我会写成：我有一个宠物，是只母猫，我叫它Princess.

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Ａ我有一宠物。我的宠物是猫.Princess是女猫. Ｂ我有一宠物。我的宠物是猫.Princess是女猫的名字.

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我有一只宠物。我的宠物是一只猫，它的名字是公主，它是只母（雌）猫。 Princess in Chinese is "公主”or“王妃” Also, when comes to beasts' gender, we say "公”，“母” or“雄” “雌” “男”“女” only used for human being.

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写得很好啊,继续努力!

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pengwen

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u should write by this way 我有一只宠物,我的宠物是只猫, Princess是只母猫.

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有，猫，一只

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I think" 我有一只猫。“is better.

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I think" 我有一只猫。“is better.

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你应该再多描述一下宠物的样子

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不错,继续努力吧不过有一点你应该说: 我有一只猫,它是一只母猫,名字叫公主! 这样就更好理解勒~ 加油

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动物不说女，是母猫

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Anthony

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一般情况下，在中文里不用女猫而是用母猫！

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michelle wang

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there must be a "个" after you used "一", and "女" can't be used to describe the sex of animal. you can use"母". anyway, you have done a good job!

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there must be a "个" after you used "一", and "女" can't be used to describe the sex of animal. you can use"母". anyway, you have done a good job!

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tianlv

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这样说没语法错误，但显得有点罗嗦。可直接说：我养了一只母猫做为我的宠物，它的名字是princess

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lotus1986

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That you said "女猫" should be said "母猫".

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We never talk about animals with "女",we always say "母".

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不能叫女猫正确的是母猫

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Review a speaking exercise by recording your own audio comment.
Focus on correct pronunciation and speaking patterns.

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