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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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我不工作。我在家学习。如果在某处我去，我散步。
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  • Dawy
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    如果我去某处,我会走路过去.
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  • suna2049
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    很好！
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  • jiangjiang0605
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    如果我散步去某处．
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  • feiyang
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    Good! 如果我去某处,我散步,这样会更好些
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  • li
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  • li
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    very good. I think it would be better if you change ”如果在某地我去“into”如果我去某地“。”我“should be the subject and "去”should be the predicate in the sentence .They are normally put in front of the sentence, especially in Chinese.Hope it will be helpful to you.
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  • vincent
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    请参考： 如果去某处，我会选择散步。
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  • edison
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  • edison
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    the point is how u go to work or study?i will say:我有的时候做公共汽车去工作，有的时候骑自行车去，天气好的时候我走路去。
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  • yiyaomi
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    我不工作,我在家学习.如果我去某处.我步行走. 散步:这个词是用在休闲的时间,没有具体的时间和方向要求.
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  • 阿八
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    我不工作，而是在家学习。如果我要去某处，我走路去（当作散步）good job,shannon,keeping it up. ^ ^
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  • the5life
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    我不工作。我在家学习。这两句没有语法问题 如果要某处我去，我散步。 这句可以改为：“如果我要去某处，我会散步去。”或者“如果我要去某处，我会走路去。” if you meant that. 散步和走路有什么不同？散步means walk freely.example:他喜欢饭后去散步。步行means walk,jsut walking not taking a bus or riding a bike.
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  • inprece
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    “如果在某处我去,我散步”.对应问题“你要做什么？”应该是英语“what are you want to do ？I will go walking.”所以可以改为“我想到外边去散步”i want to walk outside.
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