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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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Wo yao qu pao bu.
Wo yao qu xie zi blog he du blogs.
Wo yao qu chi ice cream.

I will run.
i will write a blog and read blogs.
I will eat ice cream.

(I cannot write in Chinese yet! Sorry!)
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  • Holly wu
    Mochapoints: 735  |  Teacher Score: 53 (0%)
    wo yao xie bo ke (blog) he kan bo ke . wo yao qu chi bing ji lin (ice cream)
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  • Tyler Banks
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    Nothing < That`s OK,. YOU are a good man, bi wo hai yao hao !! (I cannot write in English yet! Sorry!) HEHE,, jiayou |!
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  • Tyler Banks
    Mochapoints: 1454  |  Teacher Score: 38 (0%)
    Nothing < That`s OK,. YOU are a good man, bi wo hai yao hao !! (I cannot write in English yet! Sorry!) HEHE,, jiayou |!
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  • Tyler Banks
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  • qian
    Mochapoints: 2152  |  Teacher Score: 75 (0%)
    good
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  • ming
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    我要去跑步,我要去写博客,我要去吃冰激凌.
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  • yuwu
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  • yuwu
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    study step by step 逐步地学习. 加油! good!
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  • yiyi666
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  • yiyi666
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    不错,加油哦
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  • rosa
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  • Avril lan
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  • rosa
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    1.Wo yao qu xie zi blog he du blogs. (You can try. ) -->Wo yao qu XIE blog han dou blogs. or-->Wo yao qu XIE blog han YUE DOU blogs. 2."ice cream" --> bing chi lin
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Alex
    Mochapoints: 2598  |  Teacher Score: 138
    ok, good. xie bo ke, kan bo ke. 写博客, 看博客. chi bing jilin. 吃冰激淋.
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  • Avril lan
    Mochapoints: 433  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)
    It's good .I believe you can do better,come on !the first sentence is "我要去跑步" the second is"我要去写博客"and Pinyin is"wo yao qu xie bo ke he du bo ke"(Blog =bo ke) the third is "我要去吃冰淇淋" (ice cream=bing qi lin)
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  • goldenway
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  • goldenway
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    you are wonderful, wonderful work, well done
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  • V {独孤求败}
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    wo yao xie bo ke (blog) he kan bo ke . wo yao qu chi bing ji lin (ice cream)
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