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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

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Prudy 是我表嫡. 她比我高哈哈. 她的肤色是棕色的. 她居住在一个另外城市. 她将来拜访我在圣诞节. 如果我犯了一个错误, 请告诉我. 谢谢.

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  • jerry128g
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    Prudy 是我表嫡. 她比我高"哈哈"what is this means?. 她居住在一个另外城市. shut be "她居住在另外一个城市." 她将来拜访我在圣诞节. shut be "她将在圣诞节来拜访我"
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    她将在圣诞节来拜访我.
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    very good. Prudy是我表嫡.她比我高(哈哈).它的膚色是棕色的. 她居住在別的城市."她將在聖誕節來拜訪我". 在中文上的句子 地方可不用放在最後講,因為這樣會怪怪的
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  • lansong
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    这样"Prudy 是我表嫡. 她比我高. 她的肤色是棕色. 她居住在另外一个城市. 她将在圣诞节来拜访我. 如果我犯了一个错误, 请告诉我. 谢谢." "表嫡"这是什么?
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  • jim_tw
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    幫你稍微潤飾一下 不知道會比較好嗎 ?請見諒~~ Prudy是我的表弟.他比我還高些.他的膚色是棕色的.他居住在另外一個城市.他將在聖誕節來拜訪我.如果我寫錯了,請告訴我.謝謝
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  • chen
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    1.表弟 2.他的 他 他(because you brother is boy )
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  • Jack
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    Prudy是我表弟，他比我高，哈哈，他的肤色是棕色的。他居住在另外一个城市。他将在圣诞节来拜访我。
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  • Chynna
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    Congratulation! You did a very good job! This topic is based on the vocabulary and sentence patterns in Unit 1-1,2, "subject +be/adj." You are able to use them to write the topic in Chinese characters. You also enhance your learning based on the syntax and vocabulary from the lessons. Your writing is concise, fluent and comprehensible. I like your sentence, "她的肤色是棕色的. 她居住在一个另外城市". I just made a minor correction, "Prudy 是我表弟. 他比我高（哈哈）. 他的肤色是棕色的. 他居住在一个另外城市. 他将在圣诞节来拜访我. 如果我犯了一个错误, 请告诉我. 谢谢." Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up. Best wishes to you！ 非常好! 您能汉语文字清楚地表达熟悉的意思。您能在熟悉的题目下用课内的知识，创造中文句子。您使用的课文的句型和词汇很正确。我只作了一点修改。在课内知识基础上，您了学习其他的中文表达法，丰富了您的汉语知识。非常感谢这了不起的工作。继续努力！我为您祝福！
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  • leizi
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    中文的习惯要这样说，“她将在圣诞节来拜访我。”还有“prudy是我表弟”，你的中文很好。
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    where is wrong??? 1.她比我高. (不要哈哈） 2.她的肤色是棕色的. （肤色改成皮肤） 3.她居住在一个另外城市（一个另外改成另外一个） 4. 她将来拜访我在圣诞节，改成：她在圣诞节那天会来拜访我。
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  • shevechang
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    you should say like this prudy 是我的表姐,她的肤色是棕色,他居住在另一个城市,他会(将)在圣诞节的时候来拜访我 shannon u did a good job try your best to learn chinese iam sure u will do it better
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  • shevechang
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    you should say like this prudy 是我的表姐,她的肤色是棕色,他居住在另一个城市,他会(将)在圣诞节的时候来拜访我 shannon u did a good job try your best to learn chinese iam sure u will do it better
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    hey，friend..the sentence "她居住在一个另外城市. 她将来拜访我在圣诞节. "should be"她居住在另外一个城市。在圣诞节那天，她将会来拜访我。” ps：the time usually put in the front of the sentence in chinese..anyway u did a good job..
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  • yiyaomi
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    prudy是我表妹,她比我高.她的皮肤是棕色的.她居住在另外一个城市.她将在圣诞节来看望我. 拜访:是晚辈去看长者才能用.例如,我去拜访老师.
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  • linchangxing
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    Prudy 是我表(妹). 她比我高,哈哈. 她的(皮肤)是棕色的. 她居住在另外一个城市. 她将在圣诞节来(探望)我. 如果我犯了一个错误, 请告诉我. 谢谢. you are very good. study hard !
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