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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

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我是妇女. 我矮哈哈. 我是年轻.
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  • jerry128g
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  • Prudence
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  • mengyu
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    我年轻。we cannot use I am young in chinese just use "I young".
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  • Blacktwang
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  • Blacktwang
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    我是婦女,我矮(哈哈) 我年輕 不需要+"是" just我年輕就好
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  • jim_tw
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    hi~ If i were you,I would say that" 我是一個婦女,我有點矮.我現在還年輕,才??歲而已
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  • Chynna
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  • Chynna
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    Congratulation! You did a very good job! This topic is based on the vocabulary and sentence patterns in Unit 1-1,2, "subject +adj。" " subject +be". You are able to use them to write the topic in Chinese characters. You also enhance your learning based on the syntax and vocabulary from the lessons. Your writing is concise, fluent and comprehensible. I like your sentence, "我是妇女. 我矮." Using the learned pattern "subject +adj", I just made a minor correction ""我是妇女. 我矮(哈哈). 我年轻.”" Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up. Best wishes to you! 非常好! 您能汉语文字清楚地表达熟悉的意思。您能在熟悉的题目下用课内的知识,创造中文句子。您使用的课文的句型和词汇很正确。我只作了一点修改。"我是妇女. 我矮(哈哈). 我年轻.” 在课内知识基础上,您可以学习其他的中文表达法,丰富您的汉语知识。非常感谢这了不起的工作。继续努力!我为您祝福!
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  • blackjack
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    我是一位年輕女性.長得並不高.
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  • JIMI
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    我是個年輕的女生,沒有很高. I am young girl and not tall.
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  • JIMI
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    我是個年輕的女生,沒有很高. I am young girl and not tall.
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  • JIMI
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  • Rachel Liu
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  • Rachel Liu
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    .......
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  • Haiyang Ho
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  • Haiyang Ho
    Mochapoints: 243  |  Teacher Score: 92 (0%)
    还不错^_^
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  • Jerry
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    you know how to type Chinese words...that's good....
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  • Jeff
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  • Jeff
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    Very good! "我是妇女"I think it isn't felicitous.you're very young,and you should say "我是女孩" “我是年轻” (I‘m young.)In Chinese,we say "我年轻"。
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  • flowerbobo
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    我是女生,我的身高不高,我很年轻
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  • h2o1
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  • h2o1
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    我是女孩(妇女:已婚女孩叫妇女). 我比较矮.哈哈. 我很(是)年轻.
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  • 任性的孩子
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  • Ahmet-SuZhe-Thr...
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    Impossible wowwwwwwww!!!! ???? ^;^
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  • I wanna learn E...
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    你是妇女?17 old ! ? 你还没成年...
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  • yiyaomi
    Mochapoints: 695  |  Teacher Score: 25 (0%)
    我是女人,我矮.我年轻. 妇女:包括已婚的人.你是学生,不能自称呼妇女.
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  • steven
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    You are only17,so 女孩 is more good to describe you ,妇女 is mostly to old woman ,and 我年轻,not 我是年轻。
    Submitted over a year ago

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