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English Speaking Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Past and present actions

Instructions: Please recite the following paragraph. Press the 'add audio submission' button to record and submit this exercise.

I am walking in the park right now. I called my mother, but she is sleeping. I asked my friend to go to the park with me, but he is working on the car. I waited for my sister to come with me, but she is finishing her homework. I talked to my brother about joining me in the park, but he is packing his suitcase. Bored, I walked home from the park.

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  • waynocook
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    Well done!

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  • Jenny
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    You say all the words correctly, as you practice you will speak more quickly with more fluency.

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  • Tansynan
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    Really good, but try to slow down a little . The words in English should not all run into each other. Keep up the good work!  =]

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  • Friendship Prom...
    Mochapoints: 30170  |  Teacher Score: 5764 (97%)

    Thank you (waynocook - runner- Tansynan) for rating..

    :)

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  • towleb
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  • Pbarn89
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    In the summer, the sun can be dangerous. You must use sunscreen every two hours because when you are outside, it is important to protect your skin . The suns rays are stronger after 10am, and are strongest between noon and 4pm. It only requires 15 minutes to get a sunburn. Some people sleep in the sun at the beach and when they wake up, they have a bad sunburn. Sometimes, severe sunburns need to be treated at the hospital.

    There are many ways to structure sentences in English. I would recommend combining some of your sentences for simplicity and fluidity of your speech.

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  • Friendship Prom...
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    Thanks (towleb - Pbarn89) for rating and comments..

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  • Martin
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    Very good.

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  • Friendship Prom...
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    Thanks Martin,,

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