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English Speaking Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Surprise Party

Instructions: Please recite the following paragraph. Press the 'add audio submission' button to record and submit this exercise.

Gary Johnson went to work last Monday, as usual. He walked into the office, but nobody was there. He looked in the offices. He looked in the cafeteria. He looked in the employee bathrooms. He even looked in the basement. Gary didn't know what to do. He walked back to his office. The lights in his office were turned off. He turned on the lights and everybody he worked with yelled: "Surprise!" It was Gary's birthday.

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  • qpjuice
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  • asif
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    very nice

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    Translate
  • çiğdem
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  • adryya
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    It s ok!

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  • Alyesson Sousa
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    Good Job Man... it's nice !!!

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  • leilen
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    very good, asif..... leilen:)

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  • niloofar
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    good job man

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  • John Woodley
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    Very good effort. You need to work on your accent as your pronunciation of some words sounds heavy.

    John

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  • Allegra
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    He looked in the staff toilets. = better English...

    there - not 'der'

    looked - l like lekna, oo like dood

    know - like 'no'

    walked in - like talked, fork; in like bin

    turned off/on - turned like earn, off like cough, on like orissa

    yelled - like yeld, yellow

    birthday - birth like earth, day like say

     

    ;-) good

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  • Estanislada Isa...
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    Asif, going well, but need a litle more practice tobe fluent, practiced even, yelled. Greetings Bell's from Perú.

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    Good

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