Login with Facebook
Forgot your password? I do not have an account
Your information will be remembered for 2 weeks only.

English Speaking Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Past and present actions

Instructions: Please recite the following paragraph. Press the 'add audio submission' button to record and submit this exercise.

I am walking in the park right now. I called my mother, but she is sleeping. I asked my friend to go to the park with me, but he is working on the car. I waited for my sister to come with me, but she is finishing her homework. I talked to my brother about joining me in the park, but he is packing his suitcase. Bored, I walked home from the park.

Mii's submission: Average Rating:

Submitted over a year ago

Please Login to Review this Submission

Login



Reviews

  • Tarek
    Mochapoints: 21504  |  Teacher Score: 15759 (100%)
    Excellent. Much better than your previous one. Take care of " the " " the strongest" Best wishes.
    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
    Translate
  • Renato
    Mochapoints: 6285  |  Teacher Score: 4511 (100%)
    good
    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
  • Rod
    Mochapoints: 2903  |  Teacher Score: 626 (0%)
    Very good!!! Perfect... ;o)
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Rod
    Mochapoints: 2903  |  Teacher Score: 626 (0%)
    Very good!!! Perfect... ;o)
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Salvatore
    Mochapoints: 109381  |  Teacher Score: 101596 (99%)
    :-))))
    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
  • Afaf
    Mochapoints: 140  |  Teacher Score: 24 (0%)
    Very good my friend!!
    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
  • Jorge
    Mochapoints: 13822  |  Teacher Score: 1563 (100%)
    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
  • jramon197
    Mochapoints: 5115  |  Teacher Score: 2854 (0%)
    very good!!!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Pedrosalvador
    Mochapoints: 123273  |  Teacher Score: 115828 (100%)
    Well done, listen to my pronunciation, even if it is not the best, but nobody else did, so...
    This content requires the Adobe Flash Player.
    Get Flash string(11) "transparent"
    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
  • Taís L.
    Mochapoints: 7463  |  Teacher Score: 2352 (100%)
    good :]
    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
  • marcosjr7
    Mochapoints: 1354  |  Teacher Score: 506 (0%)
    Really nice. I've only to make a comment about how you pronounced "sunburn" -- the tonic (stronger) syllable in this word is the first one (SUN-burn), not the latter one.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Mii
    Mochapoints: 3393  |  Teacher Score: 1471
    Thanks everybody!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • chidekh
    Mochapoints: 1545  |  Teacher Score: 228 (0%)
    very good
    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
  • Manoj Gaur
    Mochapoints: 2992  |  Teacher Score: 1562
    hi nice paragraph, but i want to share few points 1. sun rays are dangerrious not the sun 2.here for outside you should use "during sunny day" 3. to express the strongness use " the intensity of sunlight increses after 1o am. 3. do not be subjective. be objective like sun burn can happen within 15 minutes. 4. sometime people with severe (not bad) sunburns needed to hospitlized
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Mii
    Mochapoints: 3393  |  Teacher Score: 1471
    I did not write the paragraph.! I just read that..this is the lesson !
    Submitted over a year ago
  • wyatt4500
    Mochapoints: 69722  |  Teacher Score: 67330 (100%)
    Superb! Keep up the good work!
    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
  • Bob
    Mochapoints: 83425  |  Teacher Score: 74634 (100%)
    OI MINHA NOVA AMIGA, ME ESCUTE. TA
    This content requires the Adobe Flash Player.
    Get Flash string(11) "transparent"
    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
  • EeVva
    Mochapoints: 2212  |  Teacher Score: 405 (0%)
    very good
    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
  • assis
    Mochapoints: 18759  |  Teacher Score: 2700
    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
  • aliq8
    Mochapoints: 68207  |  Teacher Score: 53779 (0%)

    very good

    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
  • Osvaldo Carlos ...
    Mochapoints: 21427  |  Teacher Score: 7539 (100%)
    very good. good luck
    This content requires the Adobe Flash Player.
    Get Flash string(11) "transparent"
    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:
  • Subrata
    Mochapoints: 32650  |  Teacher Score: 28002 (99%)

    EXCELLENT

    Submitted over a year ago
    Pronunciation:
    Proficiency:

Tips for Good Reviews:

Be Specific
  • Give useful suggestions and examples.
  • Write more than just brief comments like “Good job” or “Needs work".
Make Corrections
  • Use the editing features to apply strikethrough, bold or different font colors.
  • Use the virtual keyboard to insert special characters in your reviews.
Teach by Example
  • Review a speaking exercise by recording your own audio comment.
  • Focus on correct pronunciation and speaking patterns.