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English Speaking Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the Weather

Instructions: Please recite the following paragraph. Press the 'add audio submission' button to record and submit this exercise.

When there is sun and the weather is warm, the girl has sunglasses. When it is cold, the boy has a hat and a scarf. Today it is cloudy and it is snowing. Saturday is going to be rainy.

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  • Anthony
    Mochapoints: 16378  |  Teacher Score: 14609 (0%)

    Very good!

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  • Don.......傅堂诺
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    One small mistake Lucy. You pronounced slowing instead on snowing. Listen to my recording for correction.

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  • Blackbird
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    When there is sun and the weather is warm, the girl has sunglasses. When it is cold, the boy has a hat and a scarf. Today it is cloudy and it is snowing. Saturday is going to be rainy.
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  • Jim
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    Lucy, you did very good. I am adding my audio for the American accent. hehe

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  • Ronny Bryson 彭瑞...
    Mochapoints: 21824  |  Teacher Score: 16772

    Bu yong xie!

    You did very well, i like your new picture, your dress is "hen mei le"

    cloudy; you said the ou like the pinyin, it should be like the pinyin ao

    Snowing is like snou ing( ow can = ou or ao)

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  • Jim 柯杰。
    Mochapoints: 4586  |  Teacher Score: 2090 (100%)

    Hi Lucy. 你好。you sound very inthusiastic. :P. great job. Snowing sounded a little more like s(l)nowing I am not sure if it was the recording but it is my only comment. You read at a good tempo with clean careful pronunciation. keep up the great work. 加油。

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  • david$hi
    Mochapoints: 6852  |  Teacher Score: 5712 (100%)
    Hello lucy, You did very, very well. Native speaker audio provided for comparision. Best wishes david ********************************** 你好lucy, 您非常,很好。 说母语的人音频提供了比较。最好祝愿大卫
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  • edward
    Mochapoints: 16269  |  Teacher Score: 11979 (100%)

    Great, you have so many good friends.  jia you

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  • niner_bill
    Mochapoints: 6445  |  Teacher Score: 4686 (98%)
    It's very good. Be careful to distinguish your "n" sound... Practice the word "snowing" 不客气。。加油!!!
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  • 世界公民 BR TR
    Mochapoints: 1353  |  Teacher Score: 954 (0%)

    Very good ! Listen to American accent and practice carefully with your pronunciation.  

     

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  • wally
    Mochapoints: 10157  |  Teacher Score: 8875 (98%)
    Great, you are getting better every time.
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  • 白鷹
    Mochapoints: 3760  |  Teacher Score: 1875 (0%)

    Very good, no need to add comments as you have many great suggestions already. Keep up the good work.

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  • SiGe
    Mochapoints: 6003  |  Teacher Score: 4630 (100%)

    进步不小,继续努力

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  • wbistak
    Mochapoints: 1733  |  Teacher Score: 1101 (100%)
    speak a little slower and you will sound perfect!
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  • wbistak
    Mochapoints: 1733  |  Teacher Score: 1101 (100%)
    by the way..your voice is adorable!
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  • dmcgimpsey
    Mochapoints: 7678  |  Teacher Score: 6259

    Excellent.  Very good pace and good tone.  You have a very nice accent - not to strong but a bit exotic ... if I may say so.

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  • john
    Mochapoints: 2396  |  Teacher Score: 2121
    lovely
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  • sanjay
    Mochapoints: 2646  |  Teacher Score: 2498 (0%)

    beautyful work

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  • sanjay
    Mochapoints: 2646  |  Teacher Score: 2498 (0%)

    nice job

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  • sanjay
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    good work

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  • tammytmw
    Mochapoints: 18622  |  Teacher Score: 17875 (100%)
    Nice job Lucy. bu ke qi ni.
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  • Armando
    Mochapoints: 4158  |  Teacher Score: 3391 (100%)
    Very Good
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  • 普莉西拉
    Mochapoints: 7848  |  Teacher Score: 4936 (100%)
    The word "snowing" needs just a little practice, but your words can always be understood without reading the text. Excellent!
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