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Active English Writing Exercise

Starter Course 1, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Write a Note

Write an informal note to a colleague. Use the model.

Writing Model

Hi Chris,

How are you doing? Can we meet in your office at 3:00?

See you later,
Ana

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Hi Kevin,

How are you doing? Can we chat in MSN at 9:00?

If you are busy, I am fine.
PACHA
Submitted over a year ago

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  • angela.martins
    Mochapoints: 3412  |  Teacher Score: 3310 (0%)
        Dear OneI am Mrs. Angela Martins and I  married to late Mr Koffi Martins , who was former Deputy Managing Director, Cote D’Ivoire Petroleum Refinery Corporation (CIPRC) before he died in the year 2007, after a brief illness that lasted for only five days. We were married for Eighteen years with a daughter called (Silvia) who later died in a fatal motor accident.   Before the untimely death of my husband, we were both born again Christian. And since after his death I decided not to remarry or get a child outside my matrimonial home .When my late husband was alive he deposited the sum of (US$ 9. 5 Million ) Nine Million, Five hundred Thousand United States Dollars)  in a General Trust Account with a prime bank in Abidjan Cote d'Ivoire. Presently, this money is still with the bank.Following my ill health, being a victim to cancer, I have decided to donate this fund to Christian organizations / Islamic Organisations and Less Privileged in the world that will utilize this fund the way I am going to instruct herein, according to the desires of my late husband. I want this fund to be used for anything God activities like, Orphanages, Christian / Islamic Schools, and Churches for propagating the word of God and to endeavour that the house of the God is maintained. I took this decision because I don't have any child that will inherit this money and my husband relatives are Pagans and do not know about this deposit .I am not afraid of death since I know where I am going, according to the word of God which says that God will fight our case and we shall hold our peace. 20% is for you for you afort. I don't need any telephone communication in this regard because of my health.  email me to (martins.angela14@yahoo.com)     God Bless You.   Angela Martins.   
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  • 陆凯
    Mochapoints: 45167  |  Teacher Score: 21412 (100%)

    Hi Kevin,How are you doing? Can we chat in on MSN at 9:00?If you are busy, I am it is fine.PACHA

    よかった！頑張りましょう！
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  • PACHA
    Mochapoints: 83893  |  Teacher Score: 55696 (100%)

    Thank you so much!! 

    Craigさん。どうもありがとう！！！

    How ya doing ???   hehehe.. がんばります。
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