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Active English Writing Exercise

Starter Course 3, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Arrange a Cinema Trip

Make plans to see a movie. Write a text message to a friend. Use the model.

Writing Model

Ellie, I want to see 100 Days this weekend. Do you want to see it with me on Sunday? How about dinner too? :) Judy


G1's submission: Average Rating:
Hey, Ellie, how are you doing? I want to see a movie called ''up'' this weekend. Do you wanna see a movie with me after work? We can have dinner after movie of course if you do not mind. I am looking forward your answer. Have a good day - g1 :)
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  • 스테파니~
    Mochapoints: 4147  |  Teacher Score: 450

    "Up" should be capitalized. And your line "Do you wanna see a movie with me after work?" should be more like this: "Would you like to see this movie with me, after work?"

    Good job.

    Submitted over a year ago
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