Active English Writing Exercise
Active English Writing ExerciseArrange a Cinema Trip
Make plans to see a movie. Write a text message to a friend. Use the model.
Writing Model
Ellie, I want to see 100 Days this weekend. Do you want to see it with me on Sunday? How about dinner too? :) Judy
Author:
Hey, Ellie, how are you doing? I want to see a movie called ''up'' this weekend. Do you wanna see a movie with me after work? We can have dinner after movie of course if you do not mind. I am looking forward your answer. Have a good day - g1 :)
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Submitted: 2009-11-19 07:04:27
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"Up" should be capitalized. And your line "Do you wanna see a movie with me after work?" should be more like this: "Would you like to see this movie with me, after work?"
Good job.