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Active English Writing Exercise

Starter Course 1, Unit 3, Lesson 2

Write a Postcard

Write a postcard to a friend. Use the model.

Writing Model

Dear Terry,

This is my second day in Washington D.C. The city is beautiful and very interesting.

My favorite place is the Lincoln Memorial.

See you next week!
Kazuo


Israel ;)'s submission: Average Rating:
Hi Paula,

I am in city of Florianopolis. It is exciting and wonderful.
I am going to the beach, the place is very hot now.
This is my favorite place.

I see you later.
Israel
Submitted over a year ago

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  • *Еkaterina~*
    Mochapoints: 55853  |  Teacher Score: 32712 (100%)

    Hi Paula,

     

    I am going to go to a beach located in the city of Florianopolis. Florianopolis is an exciting and wonderful city and the beach is my favorite place to go because the weather is hot so it is a great place to chill out and take a swim.

     

    See you later,

     

    Israel

     

    *Good work! ^-^ I changed around you paragraph to make everything go together more smoothly and to sound more understandable. Keep going!

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  • Don Moore
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    "I'm in the city of.....

    Well done.

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  • Erin
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    Hi Paula,I am in the city of Florianopolis. It is exciting and wonderful.I am going to the beach, the place is very hot now.This is my favorite place.I will see you later.Israel

    GOOD JOB :)

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