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Starter Course 1, Unit 5, Lesson 2

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Dear Sir/Madam,

Please send me information about Intermediate French. What day and time is the class? How much does it cost?

Thank you.
Jessica Fromm

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Dear Sir/Madam,

Please send me information about Oral course for Dutch. What day and time is the class? How much does it cost? Can I charge it on my VISA card? Which dictionary does need prepare?

Thank you!
Jamie Li
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  • Daniel Reiss
    Mochapoints: 34093  |  Teacher Score: 12762 (100%)

    Very good. 

    The course in Spoken Dutch.  Which dictionary do I need / does one need to prepare? 
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • want2travel
    Mochapoints: 8132  |  Teacher Score: 5130 (100%)

    Please send me information about the Dutch Oral course Oral course for Dutch. What day and time is the class? How much does it cost? Can I charge it on my VISA card? Which dictionary does need prepare do I need to be prepared?

    I like the way you elaborate on the exercise and add your own "twist"!

    Good work! :-)
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  • Everafter416
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    ...Which dictionary does need prepare do I need?

    Very good attempt!  I'm not sure about the dictionary question-what you are asking.  Overall, very good!
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  • chinastar
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    Hen hao! I agree with the corrections made below!
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