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Active English Writing Exercise

Intermediate Course 1, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Write a Job-Wanted Advertisement

Write a job-wanted ad to post at YourJob.com. Use the model.

Writing Model

English Teacher

I'm looking for a job as an English teacher.
I have 12 years of teaching experience.
I'm energetic and I love to work with people.

Please contact me at carla.westen@yoohoo.com.

leon's submission: Average Rating:
Design Engineer

I'm looking for a job as a designer for the power tool . I have 10 years of designing experience .
I love to work at this field and I can use all professional software to make drawing .

Please contact me at :leonbd.2009@yahoo.com.cn
Submitted over a year ago

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  • pierre27
    Mochapoints: 11353  |  Teacher Score: 8648 (100%)

    Power Tool Design Engineer

    I'm looking for a job as a designer engineer for  the power tools.

    I have 10 years of designing experience in the power tool industry.

    I love to am dedicated to working at in this field and I can use all professional software to make drawing  am fully trained and a top class professional in Computer Aided Designs (CAD) in the power tool manufacturing business.

    Please contact me at :leonbd.2009@yahoo.com.cn
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Jenny 제니 珍妮 ジ...
    Mochapoints: 69928  |  Teacher Score: 46934 (92%)

    Agree with Pierre27. Keep practicing.
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  • jml442
    Mochapoints: 4561  |  Teacher Score: 3921

    Good, however you may want to practice more with your grammar. No additional comments and I agree with other members.
    Submitted over a year ago
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