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Active English Writing Exercise

Starter Course 1, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Write a Note

Write an informal note to a colleague. Use the model.

Writing Model

Hi Chris,

How are you doing? Can we meet in your office at 3:00?

See you later,
Ana


Eileen Chou's submission: Average Rating:
hi Joe,
how is everything? Can we meet in the cafe at 4 o'clock?
See you later,
Eileen
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Englishguy1
    Mochapoints: 20334  |  Teacher Score: 3158 (100%)

    Hi,

    This is very good.

    The only mistake is that you should have begun with "Hi" not hi.

    For clarity, I suggest that you put the second question on a new line (the model is not well written for this).

    Also, it is clearer to separate lines, like the model does.

    Excellent, well done.

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Steve
    Mochapoints: 10620  |  Teacher Score: 9246 (95%)

    Hi Joe,How is everything? Can we meet in the cafe at 4 o'clock?See you later,Eileen

    Excellent work,just remember,capital letters.

    Submitted over a year ago

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