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Active English Writing Exercise

Starter Course 2, Unit 2, Lesson 2

Return an Item

You ordered something online from Trend-Z. You want to return it. Fill in the online form to the Customer Support Center. Use the model.

Writing Model

trendz.com
Customer name: Andy Boland
Customer email: Andythegreat@yahoo.com
Order Item: Sketcher Shoes
Order number: XY9876-0123

Problem or Request: I want to return these shoes. They are too small. Please send me the address to return the shoes. Thank you.

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Liberdade.com
Customer name: Adauto Venturi
Customer email: artventuri@ig.com.br
Ordem item: History of Art Book

Problem or request: I want to return this book. It is not words in there. There is only book cover and pages without paintings. Please send me the address to return the book.
Thank you
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Martin
    Mochapoints: 47626  |  Teacher Score: 45839 (100%)

    Very good.

    Liberdade.com Customer name: Adauto Venturi Customer email: artventuri@ig.com.br Order Item: Book - History of Art Problem or request: I wish to return this book which I purchased recently. The book has only the book cover and pages without paintings and only contains narratives of the paintings. Please inform me on the address to return the book to. Thank you.

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Jamie
    Mochapoints: 30147  |  Teacher Score: 22887 (100%)

    Liberdade.comCustomer name: Adauto VenturiCustomer email: artventuri@ig.com.brOrdem item: History of Art bookProblem or request: I want to return this book. It is not There are no words in there. There is only the book cover and pages without paintings or words. Please send me the address to return the book.Thank you

    Instead of "There are no words in there." I would write, "The pages are blank."

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  • map
    Mochapoints: 4017  |  Teacher Score: 2001 (0%)

    See comments from Jamie. They are well spoken.

     

    Keep up the good work!

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  • Jim
    Mochapoints: 23121  |  Teacher Score: 8054 (100%)

    agree with Jamie

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  • Brian
    Mochapoints: 6102  |  Teacher Score: 2872 (100%)

    It is not words in there. ==> There are no words in the book.

    There is only book cover and pages ==> There are only book cover and pages

    Good job!

    Submitted over a year ago

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