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Active English Writing Exercise

Starter Course 3, Unit 2, Lesson 2

A Congratulations Letter

Write a note to congratulate a friend on a promotion. Use the model.

Writing Model

Hi Bob,

Congratulations on your promotion! Let's meet for lunch this week. I want to hear all about your new job!

Best,
Katherine

vimu's submission: Average Rating:
Hi Adriana,
Congratulations on your promotion! Now you can buy that house do you want so much and a new car.
Do you want go out for a dinner with me for to commemorate Saturday night? And then we'll go to the party for a dance. What do you think? I like it!!!
Love you,
Adauto
Submitted over a year ago

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  • skateorsully
    Mochapoints: 8485  |  Teacher Score: 1280 (0%)

    Congratulations on your promotion! Now you can buy that house do that you want so much and a new car. Do you want to go out for a dinner with me for to commemorate Saturday night? And Then we'll go to the party for a to dance. What do you think? I like it!!!
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  • Deanna
    Mochapoints: 16649  |  Teacher Score: 4647 (96%)

    I agree with skateorsully's corrections. 
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  • Martin
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    Very good.

    Hi Adriana, Congratulations on your promotion! You will now be able to buy that house that you wanted so much as well as a new car. Do you want go out for a dinner with me this Saturday evening to commemorate this happy ocassion? And after that we could go to the party for a dance. What do you think of the idea? I like it. Love you, Adauto
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  • lizzy
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    Hi Adriana, Congratulations on your promotion! Now you can buy that house do you want so much and a new car. Do you want go out for a dinner with me for to commemorate Saturday night? And then we'll go to the party for a dance. What do you think? I like it!!!

     

    keep trying.
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