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Active English Writing Exercise

Intermediate Course 1, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Write a Job-Wanted Advertisement

Write a job-wanted ad to post at YourJob.com. Use the model.

Writing Model

English Teacher

I'm looking for a job as an English teacher.
I have 12 years of teaching experience.
I'm energetic and I love to work with people.

Please contact me at carla.westen@yoohoo.com.


kostis's submission: Average Rating:
I' m looking for a job as a computer programmer.

In the past I have worked for about 7 years in the company "PC store" and I 'm currently making my own projects and programs building.

I am a good colleague and a person to trust.

Please contact me at kost....@gmail.com
Submitted over a year ago

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  • ACM
    Mochapoints: 1618  |  Teacher Score: 307 (0%)

    . . . and I'm currently making my own projects and building programs.

    Very good!

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • greimonn
    Mochapoints: 572  |  Teacher Score: 432 (0%)

    Very good.  Here are a couple corrections.

    I' m looking for a job as a computer programmer. In the past I have worked for about 7 years in the company "PC store" and I 'm currently making my own projects and WRITING programs. building. I am a good colleague and a TRUSTWORTHY person to trust. Please contact me at kost....@gmail.com

    Submitted over a year ago
  • flygirl
    Mochapoints: 5743  |  Teacher Score: 1093 (0%)

    You have been given some great advice on corrections!  Overall it is very good!  Bravo!

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  • CHULSA
    Mochapoints: 12715  |  Teacher Score: 11696 (100%)

    I' m looking for a job as a Computer Programmer. I have 7 years work experience with "PC store" and currently I am working on my own projects and program building.

    I am a good colleague and trust worthy person.Please contact me at kost....@gmail.com

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  • Calum Cille
    Mochapoints: 56297  |  Teacher Score: 30879 (99%)

    I'm looking for a job as a computer programmer.  I have worked for PC Store for the past seven years but now I'm involved in my own projects, including writing programs.  I'm reliable, trustworthy and I get on well with people.

    Please contact me at kost....@gmail.com.

    Well done, Kostis.  The only things to criticise are:

    NOT programs building BUT program building

    NOT In the past, I have worked for about 7 years BUT I have worked for about 7 years

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