Active English Writing Exercise Write a Welcome Memo
Imagine that your company has a new employee. Write a memo. Introduce the new employee to everyone in your office. Use the model.
Writing Model
MEMOTO: All Jewel Toys Employees
FROM: Human Resources
RE: Welcome to a New Employee
We welcome Jill Winters, our new sales manager, to our company. For the last three years, Jill was the assistant sales manager at RoboToys. She has a lot of experience in marketing and selling new products. Jill is very positive and enthusiastic. In her free time, she likes riding her bike and collecting antiques.
corrections:
No "e" on the word design.
he likes riding him"his" horse.
and (Choose one)
.....and playing his piano
/or/
he likes to ride his horse and to play piano.
The rest is very good though.
MEMOTO: PlayKids Toys EmployeesFROM: Human ResourcesRE: Welcome to a New EmployeeWe welcome Jeremy Gilmore, our new designer manager, to our company. For the last two years, Jeremy was the assistant designer manager at PlayKids Toys. He has a lot of experience in designe and marketing. Jeremy is very positive and energetic. In his free time, he likes riding him horses and to playing the piano.
Here are my suggestions.
-employee
design manager - manager of design
designer-manager -he has two jobs, a designer and a manager.
...riding horses and playing the piano.
First...it is Design without the e
...he likes riding his horse
You could say "playing piano" but "likes to play the piano" is good too.
Awesome