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Active English Writing Exercise

Intermediate Course 1, Unit 2, Lesson 2

Write a Welcome Memo

Imagine that your company has a new employee. Write a memo. Introduce the new employee to everyone in your office. Use the model.

Writing Model

MEMO

TO: All Jewel Toys Employees
FROM: Human Resources
RE: Welcome to a New Employee

We welcome Jill Winters, our new sales manager, to our company. For the last three years, Jill was the assistant sales manager at RoboToys. She has a lot of experience in marketing and selling new products. Jill is very positive and enthusiastic. In her free time, she likes riding her bike and collecting antiques.

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TO: All Employees
FROM: Human Resources
RE: Welcome to a New Employee

We welcome Mr. John Silders, our new colleague in the sales department. Mr. Silders has great exprerience in the field of sales, were he is occupied since 1987. He has worked for the greater representatives of medical equipment all around our country. Since 2001 and up to now he has been working for RH Medicine Inc. We are all glad that Mr. Silders will enforce our new selling targets with his precious help. And we are more than sure about the positive figures. Mr. Silders' office is the B12 where you can wellcome him at close quarters from Monday.
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  • fox
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    We welcome Mr. John Silders, our new colleague in the sales department. Mr. Silders has great exprerience in the field of sales, were where he is occupied has worked since 1987. He has worked for the greater representatives of medical equipment all around our country. Since 2001, and up to now he has been working for RH Medicine Inc. We are all glad that Mr. Silders will help us enforce our new selling targets. with his precious help. And We are more than sure about the positive figures. Mr. Silders' office is the B12 where you can wellcome welcome him at close quarters from starting Monday.

     

    Great job Kostis!!!  Just minor errors =)
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