Write a Job-Wanted Advertisement
Write a job-wanted ad to post at YourJob.com. Use the model.
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English Teacher
I'm looking for a job as an English teacher.
I have 12 years of teaching experience.
I'm energetic and I love to work with people.
Please contact me at carla.westen@yoohoo.com.
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I`m looking for a job as a manager.
I am studing university, my speciality manager organizing and i want to have work after my speciality.
I`m purposeful,sociable,responsible,operative,initiative. I have organizational internalss and study easily.
Submitted over a year ago
This is how I would write it:
I'm looking for job as a manager. (no changes)
I'm in college and my major is management. I would like to find a job in my specialty.
I'm purposeful, sociable, responsible, cooperative and have initiative. I have organizational skills and learn easily.
should be I am studying at university. my speciality is managing, organizing...
you wrote i want to have work after my speciality. which does not make sense to me.
ALWAYS leave a space after a punctuation mark. :)
ALWAYS capitalize the personal pronoun, "I."
Stan ^_*
I'm looking for a job as a manager. I am studying at the studing university, my speciality is management manager organizing and I'm looking for a job in my field. want to have work after my speciality. I'm purposeful, sociable, responsible, cooperative and have operative, initiative. I have organizational skills and am a quick learner. internalss and study easily.
Great job! :D I see all the corrections. Keep up the good work!! Have a nice day!! :D
I'm looking for a job as a manager. I am studying at the university and my speciality is an Organizational Manager. I want to have work after my speciality I graduate. I'm purposeful, sociable, responsible, cooperative, and have initiative. I have organizational abilities and am a quick study.
Good Elena.
I`m looking for a job as a manager. I am studying at university, my speciality is manager organizing and i want to have work after my speciality. I`m purposeful,sociable,responsible,cooperative and have initiative. I have organizational skills and learn easily.