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Active English Writing Exercise

Intermediate Course 1, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Write a Job-Wanted Advertisement

Write a job-wanted ad to post at YourJob.com. Use the model.

Writing Model

English Teacher

I'm looking for a job as an English teacher.
I have 12 years of teaching experience.
I'm energetic and I love to work with people.

Please contact me at carla.westen@yoohoo.com.


Elena's submission: Average Rating:
I`m looking for a job as a manager.
I am studing university, my speciality manager organizing and i want to have work after my speciality.
I`m purposeful,sociable,responsible,operative,initiative. I have organizational internalss and study easily.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • lchechar
    Mochapoints: 6504  |  Teacher Score: 1110 (0%)

    This is how I would write it:

    I'm looking for job as a manager. (no changes)

    I'm in college and my major is management. I would like to find a job in my specialty.

    I'm purposeful, sociable, responsible, cooperative and have initiative. I have organizational skills and learn easily.

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  • nev
    Mochapoints: 3133  |  Teacher Score: 164 (0%)

    should be I am studying at university. my speciality is managing, organizing...

    you wrote i want to have work after my speciality. which does not make sense to me.

     

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  • stan611
    Mochapoints: 72897  |  Teacher Score: 72493 (100%)

    ALWAYS leave a space after a punctuation mark. :)

    ALWAYS capitalize the personal pronoun, "I."

    Stan ^_*

    I'm looking for a job as a manager. I am studying at the studing university, my speciality is management manager organizing and I'm looking for a job in my field. want to have work after my speciality. I'm purposeful, sociable, responsible, cooperative and have operative, initiative. I have organizational skills and am a quick learner. internalss and study easily.

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  • Anthony
    Mochapoints: 139767  |  Teacher Score: 139020 (99%)

    Great job! :D I see all the corrections. Keep up the good work!! Have a nice day!! :D

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  • Ramblin
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    I'm looking for a job as a manager. I am studying at the university and my speciality is an Organizational Manager.  I want to have work after my speciality I graduate. I'm purposeful, sociable, responsible, cooperative, and have initiative. I have organizational abilities and am a quick study.

    Good Elena.

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  • keanu
    Mochapoints: 41331  |  Teacher Score: 21432 (100%)

    I`m looking for a job as a manager. I am studying at university, my speciality is manager organizing and i want to have work after my speciality. I`m purposeful,sociable,responsible,cooperative and have initiative. I have organizational skills and learn easily.

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