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Active English Writing Exercise

Starter Course 2, Unit 3, Lesson 2

Order Lunch

Write the order for your take-out lunch. Use the model.

Writing Model

Place your order:
• A cheese sandwich, on white bread, with lettuce and tomato
• A bag of Zestee Potato Chips
• A chocolate chip cookie
• An energy drink
Total price: $4.89
Name: Judy Reiner
Your debit card number: 6543-0123-9876-5678
Phone #: 212-555-8395
Address for delivery: 123 Addison Street, Apt. 2E

Jamie Li's submission: Average Rating:
Place your order:
• A hambuger
• A medium soda
• A cookie
Total price: $6.25
Name: Jamie Li
Your debit card number: 6543-8888-8888-8888
Phone #: 021-666-8888
Address for delivery: 123 Huaihai Street, Apt. 2E
Submitted over a year ago

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  • 陆凯
    Mochapoints: 45167  |  Teacher Score: 21412 (100%)

    Perfect! Nice job Jamie!
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • want2travel
    Mochapoints: 8132  |  Teacher Score: 5130 (100%)

    "hamburger"

    The rest was perfect! :-)
    Submitted over a year ago
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