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Active English Writing Exercise

Upper Intermediate Course 2, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Common Sports Injuries

Open a new window or tab in your web browser. Do a web search for "sports injuries". For a sport you are interested in, find out:

  • What kinds of injuries do players get playing this sport?
  • Which injuries are the most common?
  • What can players do to prevent and treat injuries?

Use the information you find to write a paragraph. Use the model.

Writing Model

Many volleyball players suffer from ankle injuries. Ankle injuries are common because many volleyball players do not get the proper training. They have to . . .

viviane's submission: Average Rating:
Injuries by playing tennis,
Many tennis players suffer injuries from the ankle,the shoulder,the knee,and the wrist.
To prevent injuries they can do training,but not playing too matches.
When they playing too many matches,the chance for injuries is too big.
Sports are suppose to be healthy and feeling you better.

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  • Jess
    Mochapoints: 712  |  Teacher Score: 226 (0%)

    you are missing some words here and there like in the sentence: but not by playing two matches. then the next sentence you use the word too a lot it would be more like: the chance for injuries is big. Sports are supposed to be a healthy thing and make you feel better.

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