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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today is October 16. Today, the weather is fine. Now the sun is shining brightly in the morning. It is neither hot nor cold. Today it isn't raining. So we are OK to go anywhere. I live in Hill region. Hill region is a beautiful and peaceful place. People love like the weather. The weather is good today. Today the zephyr is blowing. Tomorrow, I think the weather will be fine as today.
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    Today is October 16. The weather is fine. Now the sun is shining brightly in the morning. It is neither hot nor cold. Today it isn't raining. So we are OK to  can go to anywhere. I live in Hill region. Hill region is a beautiful and peaceful place. People love like the weather. The weather is good today. Today the zephyr is blowing. Tomorrow, I think the weather will be fine as today.

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