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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 2

Grocery Shopping

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the groceries that you bought during your last grocery shopping trip. Did you go to one store to buy everything? What was your most expensive item? What was your least expensive item? Did you buy an item that you haven’t tried before? What is one dish that you will be making this week using these groceries?

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My Country name is yemen, its located on the middel east we have acommon border with sudia arabi from north and Oman from the Eastm Read Sea from the west and arab see from the north.
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  • Zenyah
    Mochapoints: 5917  |  Teacher Score: 4379 (100%)

    My country's name is Yemen.  It's located in the Middle East.  We have a common border with Saudi Arabia on the north, Oman on the East, the Red Sea on the west and the Gulf of Aden or Arabian Sea on the north.

    Nashwan, we us 's to show possession (ownership) so, the name belongs to the country (see what I wrote).  Names of places, people, etc, should be written with a capital letter.  You also need to try and put fullstops/periods (.) in your sentences instead of using and.

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  • greenlace12
    Mochapoints: 23305  |  Teacher Score: 17888 (97%)

    Good effort Nashwan.

    Zenyah gave you excellent advice.

    Keep at it.

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