Describing the weather
Instructions:
Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3
 Ed's submission: | Average Rating: |
The days of this week were of different weather. In monday was raining and many people of my job and of university were wearing raincoat.
In tuesday the weather was better, but it was cloudy, so the people not brought the umbrella.
The weather had continued cloudy,but now, friday, it is sunny and I saw many people using
sunglasses and T shirt.
If the weekend will be sunny too, I´d be very happy.
In tuesday the weather was better, but it was cloudy, so the people not brought the umbrella.
The weather had continued cloudy,but now, friday, it is sunny and I saw many people using
sunglasses and T shirt.
If the weekend will be sunny too, I´d be very happy.
Submitted over a year ago
Please Login to Review this SubmissionLogin |
Reviews
Tips for Good Reviews:
Be Specific
- Give useful suggestions and examples.
- Write more than just brief comments like “Good job” or “Needs work".
Make Corrections
- Use the editing features to apply strikethrough, bold or different font colors.
- Use the virtual keyboard to insert special characters in your reviews.
Teach by Example
- Review a speaking exercise by recording your own audio comment.
- Focus on correct pronunciation and speaking patterns.
I would put it like this.......
This week the days were very different in weather.On Monday it was raining and many people at my place of work at the University were wearing raincoats. On Tuesday the weather was better, but it was cloudy, so the people brought their umbrellas. The weather continued to stay cloudy, but now it is Friday and it is sunny and I saw many people using sunglasses and wearing T-Shirts. If the weekend will be sunny I shall be very happy.
very good.
This week, the weather has been different. On Monday, it rained and many people at my workplace at the university wore the raincoats. On Tuesday, the weather was better, but it was still cloudy. So, the people did not bring the umbrellas. The weather had continued cloudy until yesterday. Today is Friday, and it is a sunny day. I see many people wearing sunglassess and t-shirts. If the forthcoming weekend will be sunny also, I shall be very happy.
You have done well.